Forever in My Heart
When life ends, his love remains30 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Oh beautiful one! This is indeed a lovely thought, remembering loved ones who are no longer with us. Your poem meets all the line and syllable requirements and is presented in a lovely way. Good wishes for the contest!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Oh beautiful one! This is indeed a lovely thought, remembering loved ones who are no longer with us. Your poem meets all the line and syllable requirements and is presented in a lovely way. Good wishes for the contest!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Good evening, Wendy
It will soon be the anniversary of Mike's death and I guess my mind was roaming through the memories... thank you for reading, reviewing and enjoying. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Forever is a well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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"Forever is a well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Good day, Duchess
I guess I got lost in the corridors of my mind and was thinking of him. The anniversary of his death is approaching and I miss his laughter. Thank you for the kind review.
Smiles, Carol
Carol, you're more than welcome. You certainly deserved the very kind review.
God bless you and smiles :)))
the Duchess
Comment from E. Denison
Creative use of your four lines in this contest, Begin Again. I like the formation you've presented, and the paired image is a strong one to provide additional layers to your work. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Creative use of your four lines in this contest, Begin Again. I like the formation you've presented, and the paired image is a strong one to provide additional layers to your work. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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It will soon be the anniversary of Mike's (my husband) death and I guess my mind was roaming through the memories... thank you for reading, reviewing and enjoying. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
What a great way to say it! And you did it in this super brief form, too! Yes our loved ones are forever in our hearts. And your loved ones live in the wonderful stories you create whether they are biographical or not. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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What a great way to say it! And you did it in this super brief form, too! Yes our loved ones are forever in our hearts. And your loved ones live in the wonderful stories you create whether they are biographical or not. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Good morning, Helen
It will soon be the anniversary of Mike's death and I guess my mind was roaming through the memories... thank you for reading, reviewing and enjoying. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
That's one thing nobody can take away from us, moments in our lives that repeat, and where we can escape to at special times in which that special person in our. Every now and then I remember my girls when young, .(I enjoyed being a dad so much, I still do, but now it's grandkids) special moments in the frequent travels we've had, sigh. Beautifully written Carol, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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That's one thing nobody can take away from us, moments in our lives that repeat, and where we can escape to at special times in which that special person in our. Every now and then I remember my girls when young, .(I enjoyed being a dad so much, I still do, but now it's grandkids) special moments in the frequent travels we've had, sigh. Beautifully written Carol, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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thanks Roy,
Mike's anniversary of his death is fast approaching and I guess it is messing with my head... I was remembering lots of things this morning and the poem just kind of fell together. Hope you've had a wonderful day.
Smiles, Carol
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Bless you Carol.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Thank you, Raul
I appreciate your kind words and the review. I am just getting into poetry (I'm a prose girl), so your generous remarks are welcomed. Smiles, Carol
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You're welcome!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Carol. I really like the way you formatted your lines. The image is beautiful. Good work with the style of the 4 line poem. Your words are meaningful and your them is well thought out.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Carol. I really like the way you formatted your lines. The image is beautiful. Good work with the style of the 4 line poem. Your words are meaningful and your them is well thought out.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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thank you, Jan
It's a tough time around the anniversary and he's always on my mind...guess he got to me this morning. Thanks for the kind review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Photographs bring back those fine memories and I spend some time looking at them and remembering, it is fun to look back, a fine write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Photographs bring back those fine memories and I spend some time looking at them and remembering, it is fun to look back, a fine write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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I have books and books of photographs before the computer and now I have them on line... someday I would like to separate them by people or families and have a digital copy for all time and future generations to see. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Smiles, Carol
Comment from ShirleyT1
I wish I had a six star rating left, because this is certainly deserving of a six. This is so beautiful and touched my heart to the core. Our hearts do listen and as the echoes of the laughter and memories sing so loud, we do indeed live again. Great job and best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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I wish I had a six star rating left, because this is certainly deserving of a six. This is so beautiful and touched my heart to the core. Our hearts do listen and as the echoes of the laughter and memories sing so loud, we do indeed live again. Great job and best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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I am approaching the anniversary of the death of my husband and he was on my mind this morning....thus the poem. Thank you for the generous thoughts and review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Beejay
My words don't seem enough,
A heartfelt message in just 4 lines that so many of us can relate to...
It's beautiful, exquisite, I am so pleased I chose to review it.
Good luck.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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My words don't seem enough,
A heartfelt message in just 4 lines that so many of us can relate to...
It's beautiful, exquisite, I am so pleased I chose to review it.
Good luck.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Hello again, Beejay.
I am so pleased as well. I am approaching the anniversary of my husband's death and my thoughts were with him this morning. I am not a poet but I wanted to express how I was feeling. I am thrilled that you loved this one. Smiles, Carol