Natures palette
The earth is carpeted in vibrant hues18 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I agree with your words. Your words and picture pair perfectly. Good job with the correct syllable count per line. You give readers much to think about and appreciate in the way of nature's beauty that He made.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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I agree with your words. Your words and picture pair perfectly. Good job with the correct syllable count per line. You give readers much to think about and appreciate in the way of nature's beauty that He made.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment from equestrik
This is a lovely and well put together presentation for the Ode to Autumn 5-7-5 contest. It is so hot and dry here that I would welcome a bit of Autumn right now!.
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This is a lovely and well put together presentation for the Ode to Autumn 5-7-5 contest. It is so hot and dry here that I would welcome a bit of Autumn right now!.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You painted a masterpiece with words here as you describe nature created by God and the fine colours we see on a daily basis, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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You painted a masterpiece with words here as you describe nature created by God and the fine colours we see on a daily basis, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
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Thank you Dolly 🙂
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Well done. Good luck in the contest. I especially liked the artwork that you have chosen to incorporate here. It pairs wonderfully well with your poem. Good work!
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Well done. Good luck in the contest. I especially liked the artwork that you have chosen to incorporate here. It pairs wonderfully well with your poem. Good work!
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
good presentation.
-The syllable count is
good, along with the imagery.
-Effective use of personification
with "autumn's masterpiece."
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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-Nice image and
good presentation.
-The syllable count is
good, along with the imagery.
-Effective use of personification
with "autumn's masterpiece."
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
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Comment from Dixie Barnes
I love the combination of the photo and your poem. Fall is my favorite season and the colors inspire me, to write, to paint, to photograph. I see nothing negative about this poem, only positive vibes. Keep writing and inspiring.
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I love the combination of the photo and your poem. Fall is my favorite season and the colors inspire me, to write, to paint, to photograph. I see nothing negative about this poem, only positive vibes. Keep writing and inspiring.
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Comment from Frank Jauregui
Nice entry for the Ode to Autumn contest. At first I found it odd that you chose a blank gray background with no color and no image but then the more I thought about it, your opening line, Autumn's masterpiece, reminded me of many Autumns I've experienced that I thought were masterpieces, the handy work of God. Maybe that was your intention, whatever the case, I saw in my mind what your words so well described. Well done and good luck with your entry.
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Nice entry for the Ode to Autumn contest. At first I found it odd that you chose a blank gray background with no color and no image but then the more I thought about it, your opening line, Autumn's masterpiece, reminded me of many Autumns I've experienced that I thought were masterpieces, the handy work of God. Maybe that was your intention, whatever the case, I saw in my mind what your words so well described. Well done and good luck with your entry.
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Comment from pookietoo
Very nice and very very short. Good luck to you in contests you enter. Keep smiling. Keep writing your poems. Best wishes to you. :) :) I love your picture.
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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Very nice and very very short. Good luck to you in contests you enter. Keep smiling. Keep writing your poems. Best wishes to you. :) :) I love your picture.
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