Secrets in the Wind
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Comment from royowen
With Miguel carrying out orders, he apprehend Hank and Garth, forbidding them from entering the vineyard, but Darryl intervenes and tells Miguel that they are welcome. After a short conversation with Allie, she convinces she may be the one to go undercover in the jail fo evidence, well done Carol, great writing, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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With Miguel carrying out orders, he apprehend Hank and Garth, forbidding them from entering the vineyard, but Darryl intervenes and tells Miguel that they are welcome. After a short conversation with Allie, she convinces she may be the one to go undercover in the jail fo evidence, well done Carol, great writing, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Good morning, Roy
Everyone so far has two sides to them and we don't know which to trust... I hope Allie is safe and doesn't let her "go get'em quality get her in trouble. Thanks for the review. have a great day, my friend.
Smiles, Carol
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Me too Carol,
Comment from Gert sherwood
Your chapter in your book Secrets in the Wind
- Chapter 9
Begin again
It looks like I missed a chapter. I just finished chapter 8. And found in this chapter Okay, somebody better spill their guts and tell me why this cowboy has two names and doesn't want anyone to know." What ate the names of this mysterious cowboy?
Gert
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Your chapter in your book Secrets in the Wind
- Chapter 9
Begin again
It looks like I missed a chapter. I just finished chapter 8. And found in this chapter Okay, somebody better spill their guts and tell me why this cowboy has two names and doesn't want anyone to know." What ate the names of this mysterious cowboy?
Gert
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Garth/Jeremy is an undercover FBI agent who has been in two other sequels I have written. Hank and Garth are my cold case solvers.
Smiles, Carol
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Thank you Carol
Gert
Comment from Carol Clark2
Another great chapter. Who's Amanda that clammed up earlier? And is Beth also Liz? (Just wondering if I missed something.) I enjoyed this segment. Looking forward to more chapters. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Another great chapter. Who's Amanda that clammed up earlier? And is Beth also Liz? (Just wondering if I missed something.) I enjoyed this segment. Looking forward to more chapters. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Oh, sorry...Amanda and Beth were key players in my last sequel with Hank and Garth... that's why he referred to their last case. Sorry... I should have made that clearer.
Smiles, Carol
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Thanks for the update. I was guessing that. Have a lovely day, complete with smiles. Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
Ok, so my question was answered. Apparently both Hank and Garth believe Allie to be trustworthy. Now it's going to get really interesting. Well done, again, Carol.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Ok, so my question was answered. Apparently both Hank and Garth believe Allie to be trustworthy. Now it's going to get really interesting. Well done, again, Carol.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Yes, Judy...they will need her to play an important but dangerous role in learning information from Cynthia and hopefully saving her life.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Susan Newell
Moving along well. Miguel makes me edgy, as I'm sure you intended, but I'm getting suspicious of Darryl's secret ambitions. Maybe he has his eye on Liz, too. So now Hank is taking Jeremy back to town. I was looking forward to the car ride with Garth and Allie.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Moving along well. Miguel makes me edgy, as I'm sure you intended, but I'm getting suspicious of Darryl's secret ambitions. Maybe he has his eye on Liz, too. So now Hank is taking Jeremy back to town. I was looking forward to the car ride with Garth and Allie.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Good morning, Sue
I too considered that ride to town with Allie... but decided they can't get to cozy yet...especially since she hadn't spent any time with Liz thanks to Cynthia.
Smiles, Carol
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That works.
Comment from Patty Palmer
And the mystery thickens. LOL Another chapter from this book. I look forward to every chapter that comes out. You're doing a fantastic job!
xxoo Patty
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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And the mystery thickens. LOL Another chapter from this book. I look forward to every chapter that comes out. You're doing a fantastic job!
xxoo Patty
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Thanks Patty for stopping by to read the latest chapter. I appreciate your time and review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
What better way to get answers than put Ally on the inside and maybe be able to help keep the convicted girl safe, or tip them off before something happens. Thanks for sharing. Hope you're having a great week! xo
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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What better way to get answers than put Ally on the inside and maybe be able to help keep the convicted girl safe, or tip them off before something happens. Thanks for sharing. Hope you're having a great week! xo
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Hello, my friend...
My week could be better, but then whose couldn't. I am trying to remain focused on writing and not what's brewing on the horizons. Appreciate you stopping by as always. Smiles, Carol
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Allie is determined to go into the prison as an undercover investigator. That will be a very dangerous job. Will hank's superiors okay the plan? My guess is yes. Well done, Carole. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Allie is determined to go into the prison as an undercover investigator. That will be a very dangerous job. Will hank's superiors okay the plan? My guess is yes. Well done, Carole. Nancy:)
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Thanks, Nancy... Yes, I believe the FBI Director will okay it because Jeremy is his number one agent and he trusts his judgment. I hope Allie understands the dangers. Smiles, Carol
Comment from amahra
I love small-town stories; they make for more realistic mysteries. Now they think the accident may have been planed and that makes it murder. Good chapter; nice dialogue.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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I love small-town stories; they make for more realistic mysteries. Now they think the accident may have been planed and that makes it murder. Good chapter; nice dialogue.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much, amahra for taking the time to read and find enjoyment in my story. Yes, I love the small towns too. People are more laid back and open to "gossip" which helps discover the mysteries. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
DUH--Hank Armato--knew that name sounded familiar! You're going for a detective series! Excellent chapter in all respects.
SUGG REWORD:
Theodore (Ted) and Meredith Cranston - prior owners of Sweet Haven Estates (deceased)
Jack McKinley - subsequent owner of Sweet Haven Estates (recently deceased)
Elizabeth (Liz) McKinley - Jack's widow and present owner of Sweet Haven Estates
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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DUH--Hank Armato--knew that name sounded familiar! You're going for a detective series! Excellent chapter in all respects.
SUGG REWORD:
Theodore (Ted) and Meredith Cranston - prior owners of Sweet Haven Estates (deceased)
Jack McKinley - subsequent owner of Sweet Haven Estates (recently deceased)
Elizabeth (Liz) McKinley - Jack's widow and present owner of Sweet Haven Estates
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Yes, Liz, this is the third sequel I have written with Hank and Garth. Everyone seems to enjoy their characters. Thanks for the suggestions on the list of characters.
Smiles, Carol