Morning Visitor
15 syllable poem19 total reviews
Comment from MAMONIA
How very sweet this is. I love your colorful picture and especially love butterflies.
You managed a lot in just 15 syllables. It is a great description of this image.
I wish you lots of luck in the contest.
Marie
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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How very sweet this is. I love your colorful picture and especially love butterflies.
You managed a lot in just 15 syllables. It is a great description of this image.
I wish you lots of luck in the contest.
Marie
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for this fabulous review. Val
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your image choice pairs perfectly with your well chosen 15 syllables. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Your words are well thought out and create great imagery. I could see this even if no picture had been included. Great job with the requirements of the contest. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Your image choice pairs perfectly with your well chosen 15 syllables. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Your words are well thought out and create great imagery. I could see this even if no picture had been included. Great job with the requirements of the contest. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I see many butterflies at this time of year and they delight me as well as the flowers they seek, a fine poem for the contest Val, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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I see many butterflies at this time of year and they delight me as well as the flowers they seek, a fine poem for the contest Val, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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Thank you
Comment from royowen
Well done with this highly evocative and inspirational fifteen syllable poetic entry into this contest Val, there's so much in this great, ambiguous entry, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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Well done with this highly evocative and inspirational fifteen syllable poetic entry into this contest Val, there's so much in this great, ambiguous entry, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
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Thank you, I am touch attached to this one. So your review is greatly appreciated.
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Well done
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Charming whimsy--flutters into my morning--witty closer--good vibrations. Nice work in few syllables. Clever alliteration with Beautiful butterFLy/FLutters.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Charming whimsy--flutters into my morning--witty closer--good vibrations. Nice work in few syllables. Clever alliteration with Beautiful butterFLy/FLutters.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Thank you, I wanted just to be whimsical instead of heavy. Love your review.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Val, I love the idea of running into a butterfly
as I face the morning...there used to be so many of the...
now you don't see them anymore...very rare...
I love your poem my sweet friend...and love the picture...
so very nicely written sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Hi Val, I love the idea of running into a butterfly
as I face the morning...there used to be so many of the...
now you don't see them anymore...very rare...
I love your poem my sweet friend...and love the picture...
so very nicely written sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Love you to Linda. We have so many in Southern California, and I always feel like they are gift. Love your review.
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I wish ours would come back...they are so beautiful to watch...Thank You...smiling big...love xxoo
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely butterfly and
nice presentation, Val.
-You have used your
15 syllables to write
a very good haiku-like poem.
-Good nature and seasonal
imagery as the "butterfly flutters."
-A very good concluding line, too.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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-Lovely butterfly and
nice presentation, Val.
-You have used your
15 syllables to write
a very good haiku-like poem.
-Good nature and seasonal
imagery as the "butterfly flutters."
-A very good concluding line, too.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Thank you, Pam. I know it's haiku style but you know that is my passion. I really appreciate your support, since I am so on and off on this site. I think Covid took a toll on my motivation.
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You are welcome, Val, and I appreciate your reply. Hopefully, your motivation will improve over time. I don't think there was anyone who wasn't impacted by it, and still are. Take care and be well.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Val Crisson,
your15 syllable poem about your morning visitor is beautiful with only 15 syllables. I wish I had your visitor wake me up in the morning and see it's wings flutter.
Gert
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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Val Crisson,
your15 syllable poem about your morning visitor is beautiful with only 15 syllables. I wish I had your visitor wake me up in the morning and see it's wings flutter.
Gert
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Thank you, Gert, I wish I could send some your way. We seem to have an abundance here in California. So great to hear form you. Hugs Val
Comment from RodG
Your camera takes a vivid snapshot of this morning scene. Our imaginations capture the grace of this "bright butterfly" flitting into your yard. The last line is a delightful play on words and brings back the Beach Boys' hit song. Rod
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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Your camera takes a vivid snapshot of this morning scene. Our imaginations capture the grace of this "bright butterfly" flitting into your yard. The last line is a delightful play on words and brings back the Beach Boys' hit song. Rod
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
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Rod you always say the right words. Thank you for the beautiful review