Comment from
RodG
This septolet captures the MOOD of this beach scene beautifully. You make it easy to visualize the "sandpipers on copper sand" while also experiencing how the Speaker stores this experience in her memory. Rod
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
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Comment from
royowen
This is a beautifully composed septolet with highly imaginative imagery of the seashore activity of these unique birds and the pleasurable activities at the seashore, well done, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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