The Chronicals Of Bethica: The Rise
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "The Chronicles Of Bethica"Abram must defeat a deadly humanoid race of beings
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Comment from Ric Myworld
I can't believe it's only Monday and I'm already out of sixes for the week, which tells me that they just don't give us enough. But like always, your chapter is brimming with action and touches of humor to let me catch my breath. Thanks for sharing another great chapter.
Quick, grabbed the scrolls," Dinary said, scrambling off the floor. [I'm guessing you meant grab?-- or quickly?]
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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I can't believe it's only Monday and I'm already out of sixes for the week, which tells me that they just don't give us enough. But like always, your chapter is brimming with action and touches of humor to let me catch my breath. Thanks for sharing another great chapter.
Quick, grabbed the scrolls," Dinary said, scrambling off the floor. [I'm guessing you meant grab?-- or quickly?]
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
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Thank you, I just made that correction.
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I almost never point out those mistakes we all make, but I figured you'd want it pointed out. :-)
