Mr. Skunk
Humorous story of a skunk.15 total reviews
Comment from Alaskastory
"Mr. Skunk" shows a picture of a wanted and handsome friend for Phil. Jake certainly does bring in real life into the a story of so few words. Every word from Phil or Jake gives it real humor. Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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"Mr. Skunk" shows a picture of a wanted and handsome friend for Phil. Jake certainly does bring in real life into the a story of so few words. Every word from Phil or Jake gives it real humor. Well done.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed my story!
Comment from kahpot
Ha! Ha! one could imagine the/any skunk wanting to make a friend, the smell cemented the friendship, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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Ha! Ha! one could imagine the/any skunk wanting to make a friend, the smell cemented the friendship, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, okay, I guess something's are superficial when friendship is involved. I am unsure of the humorous part. But I see this as a lighthearted tale with a moral or lesson it is supposed to convey.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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Hmm, okay, I guess something's are superficial when friendship is involved. I am unsure of the humorous part. But I see this as a lighthearted tale with a moral or lesson it is supposed to convey.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
This is whimsical and charming, but I don't think it qualifies as is for the contest--I found out the hard way they require a full story--what actually happens here? I think I'm missing something.
Excellent!
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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This is whimsical and charming, but I don't think it qualifies as is for the contest--I found out the hard way they require a full story--what actually happens here? I think I'm missing something.
Excellent!
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Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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Thank you! I have changed the story. Is it better now?
Comment from Susan Brightwell
It's cute ,but I would take out the word-had- and just write out" who have" instead of
-who've had- <--doesn't make sense
Otherwise it's too cute! I also love your cover picture which pairs nicely with your short story.
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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It's cute ,but I would take out the word-had- and just write out" who have" instead of
-who've had- <--doesn't make sense
Otherwise it's too cute! I also love your cover picture which pairs nicely with your short story.
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Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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I have fixed the mistake. Is it good enough for a five star rating now? Thank you!
