A Pirate's Tale
The start of an adventure.12 total reviews
Comment from JudyE
I enjoyed your pirate poem. You've stirred the imagination with just a few short lines, and made good use of the mandatory words.
In the following, there is a typo. The first word should be 'they'
I wish you good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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I enjoyed your pirate poem. You've stirred the imagination with just a few short lines, and made good use of the mandatory words.
In the following, there is a typo. The first word should be 'they'
I wish you good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Thank You!
Comment from Ashlyn Stone
They in the next to last paragraph is misspelled. Otherwise you followed all the proper writing prompts. It is a cute little story. Thank you for sharing your writing with us.
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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They in the next to last paragraph is misspelled. Otherwise you followed all the proper writing prompts. It is a cute little story. Thank you for sharing your writing with us.
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Thank You!