The Chronicals Of Bethica: The Rise
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "The Chronicles Of Bethica"Abram must defeat a deadly humanoid race of beings
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Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
This is my first read of your work since returning to the site. As I am fascinated by the sea I was drawn to this. I am very impressed with the high quality of your characterisation and plan to read more. You have a real gift for words- well, from the names of your books, my interest is piqued as I like to choose books by title. To me the title can say so much. Your job as a ghostwriter for games also makes me jealous! Anyway your work is incredible I will be reading much more of it well done and kindest regards Meia xx virtual six
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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This is my first read of your work since returning to the site. As I am fascinated by the sea I was drawn to this. I am very impressed with the high quality of your characterisation and plan to read more. You have a real gift for words- well, from the names of your books, my interest is piqued as I like to choose books by title. To me the title can say so much. Your job as a ghostwriter for games also makes me jealous! Anyway your work is incredible I will be reading much more of it well done and kindest regards Meia xx virtual six
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much, Meia (you have such a beautiful name) for reading and reviewing my work. I'm flattered by your comments.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh my, we have a lot going on; an eagle necklace that causes burns, but after being thrown into the ocean reappears on Dinary's neck, a star map given by the gods, and a wrecked ship with skeleton's holding extremely long swords. Of course, I'm coming back to read.
"Shall I call the Medicus?" She asked with great concern. ("Shall I call the Medicus?" she asked with great concern.)
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Oh my, we have a lot going on; an eagle necklace that causes burns, but after being thrown into the ocean reappears on Dinary's neck, a star map given by the gods, and a wrecked ship with skeleton's holding extremely long swords. Of course, I'm coming back to read.
"Shall I call the Medicus?" She asked with great concern. ("Shall I call the Medicus?" she asked with great concern.)
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thank you, Barbara.
Comment from papa55mike
Just when you think you have something figured out. Here comes a curveball. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your book!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Just when you think you have something figured out. Here comes a curveball. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your book!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thank you, Mike.
