Long Lasting Love
A long lasting love is based on truth and teamwork.19 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
Excellent imagery and visuals here. Love is a blessing and when it continues to grow every day "without deception or lies", when the two are a team, like in the picture you chose, this is a true bliss. A great artwork chosen to accompany your words.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Excellent imagery and visuals here. Love is a blessing and when it continues to grow every day "without deception or lies", when the two are a team, like in the picture you chose, this is a true bliss. A great artwork chosen to accompany your words.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Thank You so much!!! I took this picture of my parents 😊
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A long lasting love is based on truth and teamwork.
Long Lasting Love
Excellent entry for the 34 Syllables writing prompt contest. I like the presentation and picture. It's a romantic poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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A long lasting love is based on truth and teamwork.
Long Lasting Love
Excellent entry for the 34 Syllables writing prompt contest. I like the presentation and picture. It's a romantic poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Thank You so much! I took this picture of my parents
Comment from royowen
When one first falls in love, that's only the beginning of the story, and really love although needs to be served, love is a verb, not a noun and requires sacrifice, honesty, and kindly activity. Beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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When one first falls in love, that's only the beginning of the story, and really love although needs to be served, love is a verb, not a noun and requires sacrifice, honesty, and kindly activity. Beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Awe thank you !!!
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Bless you
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Nicely written 34 syllable love poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme . Beautiful overall presentation as well. Nice background colour and font. Nice photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Nicely written 34 syllable love poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme . Beautiful overall presentation as well. Nice background colour and font. Nice photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Thank You so much!
Comment from Sandra C. Johnston
Well done. It is difficult to stay within syllable requirements when one is trying to give a concrete message. I like your idea and you're yourreflection on commitment.
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Well done. It is difficult to stay within syllable requirements when one is trying to give a concrete message. I like your idea and you're yourreflection on commitment.
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Thank You very much !!
Comment from Yohani
I always enjoy poems about true love and the team work behind it. It's admirable and a pleasure to visualize what is being written. Great picture to go with it. Great writing.
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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I always enjoy poems about true love and the team work behind it. It's admirable and a pleasure to visualize what is being written. Great picture to go with it. Great writing.
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Thank you so much for the review
Comment from irishauthorme
I think teamwork is the key word here. Sharing everything keeps you close and that is true for the celebrations and good times, but also for the everyday chores that are too often shoved off on the wife. By that I mean the dishes, the laundry and carrying out the trash.
If the marriage is not 50/50, it often does not last.
irish
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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I think teamwork is the key word here. Sharing everything keeps you close and that is true for the celebrations and good times, but also for the everyday chores that are too often shoved off on the wife. By that I mean the dishes, the laundry and carrying out the trash.
If the marriage is not 50/50, it often does not last.
irish
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Yes, I agree ! Thank You for your review 😊
Comment from Anne Johnston
"A love story starts out
with so many highs.
It will continue to grow
Without deception or lies.
Live as a team,
reaching for your dream."
This is such great advice, a good entry for this contest.
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reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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"A love story starts out
with so many highs.
It will continue to grow
Without deception or lies.
Live as a team,
reaching for your dream."
This is such great advice, a good entry for this contest.
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Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Thank You very much 😊
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You are welcome
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A beautiful thought expressed in a few words. True love for each other is should be a journey starting at forever and ending at never. Each has to work hard to keep it going. Good luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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A beautiful thought expressed in a few words. True love for each other is should be a journey starting at forever and ending at never. Each has to work hard to keep it going. Good luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Thank You so much