NaPoWriMo 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "30. Lasts"NaPoWriMo 2021 Poetry Challenge
15 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Davis
A great choice for your last entry in this challenge. This poem flows very effectively, making it an easy and enjoyable read. The unexpected arrival and passage of each "last" is a message that resonates so true. Nicely presented.
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
  |
A great choice for your last entry in this challenge. This poem flows very effectively, making it an easy and enjoyable read. The unexpected arrival and passage of each "last" is a message that resonates so true. Nicely presented.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
-
Thank you, Sharon, for your lovely feedback :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Gloria ....
What a beautiful family, and I have read along with your project and must say you have compiled many interesting poems, and poetic forms, and many congratulations are to be extended to you.
Super job, Debra. It has been fun. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
|
What a beautiful family, and I have read along with your project and must say you have compiled many interesting poems, and poetic forms, and many congratulations are to be extended to you.
Super job, Debra. It has been fun. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 30-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
-
Thank you so much, Gloria :) I truly appreciate your lovely feedback and also your support and encouragement for the challenge this month. Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Anne Johnston
That is a great poem to end your month with. It is so true, we blink our eyes and our children are grown, then we go through the same thing with grandchildren. Nice picture of your family. Congratulations of persevering and writing all your poems for this contest. I commend you for sticking to it.
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
|
That is a great poem to end your month with. It is so true, we blink our eyes and our children are grown, then we go through the same thing with grandchildren. Nice picture of your family. Congratulations of persevering and writing all your poems for this contest. I commend you for sticking to it.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
-
Thank you so much, Anne :) I appreciate your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra
-
You are welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Congratulations on finishing the Napowrimo Challenge! You entertained us all month with your poetry and you even promoted your work so, thank you! I love this picture of you and your children! And what you expressed resonates with all us moms, - yes, where did that time go?
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
|
Congratulations on finishing the Napowrimo Challenge! You entertained us all month with your poetry and you even promoted your work so, thank you! I love this picture of you and your children! And what you expressed resonates with all us moms, - yes, where did that time go?
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
-
Thank you so much, Helen :) I have appreciated your support and encouragement with the contest this month. I've enjoyed taking part, although I'd be fibbing if I said I wasn't happy the month was up!
Sending you my best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment from royowen
Yes, they do, it doesn't seem so long ago, that I was gazing in wonder at my first born in her crib, scared as all the future pressed in to haunt me, but several years, and grandchildren later, we made a good fist of it, he cried...modestly. Beautifully written Debra, blessings Roy
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
|
Yes, they do, it doesn't seem so long ago, that I was gazing in wonder at my first born in her crib, scared as all the future pressed in to haunt me, but several years, and grandchildren later, we made a good fist of it, he cried...modestly. Beautifully written Debra, blessings Roy
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
-
Thank you so much, Roy, for your empathetic feedback. We can only do our best! Best wishes as always, Debra :)
-
Well done