Comment from Kerry L Batchelder

Exceptional

Your illustration was really cute and spot on in showing a selfish person. It even has a somewhat humorous aspect which I enjoyed. The wording is perfect! Great job!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021

Thank you so much, Kerry, for your lovely feedback and generous star rating. I appreciate both :)
Best wishes, Debra

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Yes indeed, the human animal is certainly all of those things, and has had those propensities, it seems, for many eons, but there is a nobility that is "godlike" too, so tale heart. Beautifully written Debra, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021

Thank you, Roy, for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)

reply by royowen on 26-Apr-2021

Well done

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Hi, Debra.

Your pithy little poem has good rhyme and a strong bouncy rhythm as well as a clear message. 'I'm alright, Jack' gives it a colloquial twang as well. Any shorter and you'd have a great bumper sticker!

I like it.

Steve

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 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021

Thanks, Steve :) I appreciate your feedback.
Best wishes, Debra