Wine Fueled Words
20 word poem17 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wine Fueled Words
by Leann DS
Hello, Leann,
Excellent entry for the 20 Word Poem contest. Good word count and connection between lines. The imagery and presentation are nice. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Wine Fueled Words
by Leann DS
Hello, Leann,
Excellent entry for the 20 Word Poem contest. Good word count and connection between lines. The imagery and presentation are nice. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Thank you, gypsy. I appreciate your review and comments. Thank you for reading my poem. Hugs.
Comment from Sharon Davis
Your 20 word poem speaks volumes and highlights a sentiment I am sure, resonates with many. Nicely composed and presented. Great job. Thanks for sharing this piece.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Your 20 word poem speaks volumes and highlights a sentiment I am sure, resonates with many. Nicely composed and presented. Great job. Thanks for sharing this piece.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your complementary review. I'm glad you like it and that you stopped by. Hugs and blessings.
Comment from Susan Newell
Sad, but true; "in vino veritas." I'm afraid alcohol tends to reduce inhibitions a wee bit too much, as you have so eloquently expressed in your poem. So many regrets begin with the opening of a bottle. But . . . there are also good times, and a little much-needed relaxation. Great job.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Sad, but true; "in vino veritas." I'm afraid alcohol tends to reduce inhibitions a wee bit too much, as you have so eloquently expressed in your poem. So many regrets begin with the opening of a bottle. But . . . there are also good times, and a little much-needed relaxation. Great job.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Ha ha yes, and thank you for reviewing and reading my poem. You are appreciated. Hugs.
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You are welcome.
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written twenty word entry in this contest, hic. I like that, the wine is talking, don't worry, as a once alcoholic I know what you mean, I've made a lot of unrehearsed speeches too. Excellent humour, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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A beautifully written twenty word entry in this contest, hic. I like that, the wine is talking, don't worry, as a once alcoholic I know what you mean, I've made a lot of unrehearsed speeches too. Excellent humour, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Roy, for reviewing my poem. Your review and comments are appreciated. Sometimes we just Gotta take it one day at a time. Hugs.
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Bless you
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Leann.
Your poem describes the regrets of the wine bottle. There are no regrets until the bottle is empty. The only problems occur when the wine is in the "wrong" container. Your message is clear.
Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Hello Leann.
Your poem describes the regrets of the wine bottle. There are no regrets until the bottle is empty. The only problems occur when the wine is in the "wrong" container. Your message is clear.
Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Well, for me, the regrets often happen when the bottle is only half empty. Ha ha I'm a lightweight. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Hugs to you.
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You're welcome Leann.
Comment from Jean Lutz1
Artwork and word weaving is the blend for me. I should make this my prayer since my mouth has a tendency to pop-off. Glad to drape a six star rating on this one and I wish you well with your entry.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Artwork and word weaving is the blend for me. I should make this my prayer since my mouth has a tendency to pop-off. Glad to drape a six star rating on this one and I wish you well with your entry.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Thank you so, so much! I humbly appreciate your comments and six stars! Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Brilliant--you made optimal use of your 20-word allotment and wisely availed yourself of the title space to expand wittily upon the sobering (so to speak) theme. This may be a winner.
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Brilliant--you made optimal use of your 20-word allotment and wisely availed yourself of the title space to expand wittily upon the sobering (so to speak) theme. This may be a winner.
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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I'm drunk on your words! :-) Thank you so much for the complementary review and encouragement offered. You are appreciated. Hugs, blessings, and wine do you.