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NaPoWriMo 2021 Poetry Challenge

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I agree, Debra. We all have so much to be thankful for, yet many dwell on the negative. Your poem is well-written. I like the use of rhyme and the great and true message.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
    Thank you so much, Jan, for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Susan Newell
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Good for you! Most of us encounter troubles enough in our own lives that we don't want a steady diet of trauma, angst and sadness. I love your rebelliously happy little poem. I, too, am grateful for the good things in my life and glad that our Creator has blessed us with so much.

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
    Thank you so much, Susan :)
    I appreciate your lovely feedback. Best wishes as always, Debra
reply by Susan Newell on 17-Apr-2021
    Welcome!