NaPoWriMo 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "6. Privacy"NaPoWriMo 2021 Poetry Challenge
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, you had me doubled up with this one Debra, it is so invented, very funny and your metre is spot one, what a special write this is, great rhymes and I just have to give you a six, you entertained me here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Ha ha ha, you had me doubled up with this one Debra, it is so invented, very funny and your metre is spot one, what a special write this is, great rhymes and I just have to give you a six, you entertained me here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Hello Dolly :)
Thank you again for this lovely review. You made my day!
I'm glad that you appreciate my humour ;)
Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, that little tiny room could, if one wanted, be a bedroom, if one had a narrow mattress to recline one, but because we look after our grands a few days a week we have a small bolt on the door. Beautifully written Debra, blessings Riy
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Oh yes, that little tiny room could, if one wanted, be a bedroom, if one had a narrow mattress to recline one, but because we look after our grands a few days a week we have a small bolt on the door. Beautifully written Debra, blessings Riy
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much, Roy, for your kind feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
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Most welcome
Comment from Susan Newell
Debra, this is a very funny little poem to express your frustration at never having privacy. Young kids just don't understand. As teens, they will demand lots of privacy for themselves. Good luck with the bolt!
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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Debra, this is a very funny little poem to express your frustration at never having privacy. Young kids just don't understand. As teens, they will demand lots of privacy for themselves. Good luck with the bolt!
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Hello Susan, thank you for your feedback!
My children are now aged 10, 13 and 15yrs, and as you say, beginning to demand their own privacy and pretty much let me go to the bathroom in peace these days!
I channelled my past frustrations to write this poem today!
Best wishes, Debra :)
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Whew! That's a relief. (No pun intended.)
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LOL! x
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You have shown a certain low class humour in this piece, known as toilet humour if you were writing about any other room in the house. It works very well.
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You have shown a certain low class humour in this piece, known as toilet humour if you were writing about any other room in the house. It works very well.
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your comments.