NaPoWriMo 2021
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Comment from Bill Schott
This Joseph's Star poem, Art, has the proper formatting and explains the pathway of the minds view of beauty through the hands to form, in some way, its presentation. Nice.
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This Joseph's Star poem, Art, has the proper formatting and explains the pathway of the minds view of beauty through the hands to form, in some way, its presentation. Nice.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your feedback, Bill :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Gina Schneller
I love it! Creative and accurate! Most people don't understand that communication is what art truly is. Expressing emotion etc... thank you so much for sharing!!!
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I love it! Creative and accurate! Most people don't understand that communication is what art truly is. Expressing emotion etc... thank you so much for sharing!!!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much, Gina :) I appreciate your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Susan Newell
Happy Birthday. I love it when art describes art. This is a simple yet eloquent Joseph's Star and I think it's great that you managed to squeeze it in, or out, on your big, busy day.
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Happy Birthday. I love it when art describes art. This is a simple yet eloquent Joseph's Star and I think it's great that you managed to squeeze it in, or out, on your big, busy day.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much, Susan :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from royowen
First of all, happy birthday to you Debra, and, of course, you deserve to be spoilt by your family, and it's so good for you to see your parents again, a beautifully written Joseph's star, well done, blessings Roy
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First of all, happy birthday to you Debra, and, of course, you deserve to be spoilt by your family, and it's so good for you to see your parents again, a beautifully written Joseph's star, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Roy! Thanks also for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
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Most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
You really have a great mastery of the Joseph's Star form. I like that your first and last word rhyme: art-heart. And naturally, art has to come from the heart. So glad that you are having a wonderful birthday!
Happy Birthday!!
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You really have a great mastery of the Joseph's Star form. I like that your first and last word rhyme: art-heart. And naturally, art has to come from the heart. So glad that you are having a wonderful birthday!
Happy Birthday!!
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much, Helen :)
Best wishes, Debra x