NaPoWriMo 2021
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Comment from Sally Law
My favorite game with my cousins growing up. We had eight in all which made for a fine sport anytime we were together. A fun offering inCUBE 16 for your daily poem. You're doing fabulous, dear Debra!
Sending you my best and blessings always,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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My favorite game with my cousins growing up. We had eight in all which made for a fine sport anytime we were together. A fun offering inCUBE 16 for your daily poem. You're doing fabulous, dear Debra!
Sending you my best and blessings always,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Hi Sally :) I've always loved playing, it's such fun!
Thank you for your lovely feedback and encouragement.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Wendy G
A sweet poem for children! Kids have played this for generations, and it never seems to lose its appeal. Well written, and very suited to the cube style.
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A sweet poem for children! Kids have played this for generations, and it never seems to lose its appeal. Well written, and very suited to the cube style.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much, Wendy, for your lovely feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Susan Newell
What a fun rendition of the Zimmerman cube. I think that game has been fun for all who've played, though I must admit to being way past the age to be able to do so. Great job, Debra.
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What a fun rendition of the Zimmerman cube. I think that game has been fun for all who've played, though I must admit to being way past the age to be able to do so. Great job, Debra.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Hello Susan :) I appreciate your lovely feedback! Thank you...
Best wishes, Debra
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Most welcome.
Comment from royowen
I can remember playing with my own kids, and now with my grands, they are so keen, and I must say I'm not, but I'm keen on them, I want to always be an example to them, revealing God's nature, (Lord help me!) Well done, Debra, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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I can remember playing with my own kids, and now with my grands, they are so keen, and I must say I'm not, but I'm keen on them, I want to always be an example to them, revealing God's nature, (Lord help me!) Well done, Debra, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Aw Roy, I'm sure that you're a fab and fun granddad, and your grandchildren will appreciate you spending fun times with them playing. Thank you for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
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Bless you Debra
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Perfect! I love the poem and adorable picture. The cube 16 is my new all-time favourite for children's poetry, and yours proves my point. It rolls beautifully off the tongue and it's a format children can memorise. Well done, Debra, you have a winner here. I always loved that game! :)) Sandra xxx 27 to go! Lol.
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Perfect! I love the poem and adorable picture. The cube 16 is my new all-time favourite for children's poetry, and yours proves my point. It rolls beautifully off the tongue and it's a format children can memorise. Well done, Debra, you have a winner here. I always loved that game! :)) Sandra xxx 27 to go! Lol.
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Thanks so much, Sandra :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Have a lovely weekend. Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Hi Debra your poem it's perfect for the contest and with it's playful rhyme it's a nice addition to any childhood anthology. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Hi Debra your poem it's perfect for the contest and with it's playful rhyme it's a nice addition to any childhood anthology. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your feedback :) Best wishes, Debra