Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

This lovely children's story-poem would make a great book with loads of illustrations. It's gorgeous. So much going on and a child would be so enthralled, cheering on as they get to nibble on the pink jelly bean at the end. Superb, well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2021

---

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021

Thanks so very much.......these are fun to sketch out......Godspeed to you and yours.....

Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

This is a very cute and very well written Easter poem for children about Bubbins and the Easter Bunny. You used very good descriptive and very cute words. This is a very well written six star poem. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings,Teri

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

---

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021

Thanks so very much.....these little verses are fun to put together.....Godspeed and Best Wishes.....

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Love the names of the characters in this work, children will relate, I am left asking about some of the lines and words used for children " chanticleer " and "a sudden storm (raked) through, these may be a bit hard for the little ones to grasp, none the less very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

---

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021

Thank you....you are right...this could use a little trim here and there....Godspeed to you and yours....

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

A very cute Easter poem that children are sure to enjoy. The first stanza pulled me in:
"Easter Bunny could be a trickster
He could tease and hoot and hail
But his latest trick had a misstep
For old Bubbins was a snail"

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

---

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021

Thanks very much....I have enjoyed these tiny little ditties since childhood.....Godspeed and Best Wishes...

Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly

Excellent

A lovely take on the old Easter theme. A story about an Easter snail. Well, determination maketh the snail it seems. Never my favourite molluscs, I may look on them with a kindlier eye in future.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

---

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021

Thanks so very much......Godspeed and Happy Easter to you and yours......

reply by Bluesatinbutterfly on 04-Apr-2021

it was my pleasure.

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

This is a cute Easter poem for children. It's busy and bubbly and makes you want to smile. The rhyme and rhythm are perfect. I would think most children would enjoy it.
Happy Easter
Patty

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

---

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021

Thanks so very much....Godspeed and a very Happy Easter to you and yours.....

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Nicely done Easter poem which shows the togetherness and encouragement of everyone on this day. Just as we are glad for what we are given today, Bubbins is glad for his jelly bean.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy/
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

---

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021

Thanks so very much.....Godspeed and Happy Easter to you and yours.....

reply by dragonpoet on 05-Apr-2021

Any time.
dp

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

This is a delightful poem for children, very engaging story and quite original. I think this would make a fine book for kids, with some colorful illustrations. Thanks for sharing, good luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

---

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021

Thanks so very much......Godspeed and Happy Easter to you and yours.....

Comment from Susan Newell

Excellent

This is a cute children's poem with all the little creatures helping poor Bubbins make his journey to the top of the tree to get his jelly bean. The only thing I wonder is, who put it there?

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

---

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021

Thanks so much....this is part of a silly larger story....During the Midnight Ride of the pocket fairies and the sneaky ravens of Ronshapee, pirated magical jelly beans were secretly hidden throughout the forest....Happy Easter and Godspeed to you and yours

reply by Susan Newell on 04-Apr-2021

Aah. That explains it. :-)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a well metered and rhymes children's poems about a cute snail joining in the Easter festivities, this is unique and clever and I enjoyed every word, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021

---

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021

Thanks so very much.....Happy Easter....you are my hero(along with Lord Nelson and the Duke of Wellington).....Godspeed to you and yours