NaPoWriMo 2021
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This poem has a sweet sentimental touch Debra as new life has a series of firsts until they age and the word first turns to last, last dance, last glance, last chance, ha ha ha, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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This poem has a sweet sentimental touch Debra as new life has a series of firsts until they age and the word first turns to last, last dance, last glance, last chance, ha ha ha, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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So true, Dolly, and thanks for helping me out with ideas! The last poem (on 30th April) for the NaPoWriMo poetry challenge is to be entitled 'Lasts' LOL
Best wishes, Debra :) x