Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

And possibly you can drink it in a darkened room in your apartment while the snow melts before the thunderstorms. But I digress. What a wonderfully written little story. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2021

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Once again, you nailed the latest in Coronella's nasty bag of tricks. Faux vacations with imaginary accoutrements.

Juda's=>JUDAS' kiss

7 degrees [OMIT: with plus]

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 Comment Written 15-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021

Thank you so much Liz:) and cheers:)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You've become a Canadian bear??? Seven degrees? BRRR!! I would still need two jackets. But the Bacardi is something I never experienced so I don't know if it's any different in different temperatures. But I know you have a great imagination so imagine that warm beach with a heater nearby.

with Juda's kiss. (Judas's)
We had 7 degrees with plus, (omit 'with')


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 Comment Written 15-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021

Thank you so much Helen, I have not tried Bacardi either, but it sounds tasty in that commercial on the beach:)