Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
Viewing comments for Chapter 112 "Ice Packed Life"Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
17 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Too bad, if you missed the due date. This was an exemplary entry. The picture and the words fuse well together and render the message clearly.
Well done.
Ralf
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Too bad, if you missed the due date. This was an exemplary entry. The picture and the words fuse well together and render the message clearly.
Well done.
Ralf
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Bless you and Thank you for your Support and Review.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are descriptive, clear and creative. I pondered on the
thoughts of winter as I read these words. The poem flows and connects.
The artwork is awesome and compliments both the theme and words of
this poem.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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The author's words are descriptive, clear and creative. I pondered on the
thoughts of winter as I read these words. The poem flows and connects.
The artwork is awesome and compliments both the theme and words of
this poem.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support, the pix this challenge offers great photos and interesting topics to write about. Blessings.
Comment from ESOSTINE
A great piece of Haiku with perfect end rhymes. The associated picture was quite helpful in passing the message in the poem. I found the oxymoron 'winters warming doom' very creative and interesting. Well composed, dear QC POET! Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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A great piece of Haiku with perfect end rhymes. The associated picture was quite helpful in passing the message in the poem. I found the oxymoron 'winters warming doom' very creative and interesting. Well composed, dear QC POET! Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Review. Blessings.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your haiku for the club is in great form. I enjoyed reading it. Your words are well-chosen and create great imagery. I could see this as I read regardless if a picture had been included. Your image is a great pairing, too. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Your haiku for the club is in great form. I enjoyed reading it. Your words are well-chosen and create great imagery. I could see this as I read regardless if a picture had been included. Your image is a great pairing, too. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
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Bless you for your Support and Review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I'm not a poet and don't understand the rules, but I like your poem and it's image of winter being doomed. I sure hope it is this year. And you picked a good picture of a bloom that appears as the last of the snow disappears.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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I'm not a poet and don't understand the rules, but I like your poem and it's image of winter being doomed. I sure hope it is this year. And you picked a good picture of a bloom that appears as the last of the snow disappears.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Your instinct is on pointn 3rd line, the other 2 lines are descriptive of opposing point the Ice. At least that's my understanding of the correct form, working on improvement.
Comment from oliver818
This is a nice little poem, I really enjoyed reading it. You pack a lot of imagery into a very small space. I particularly like the contrast you make between the womb and then at the end, doom. The rhyme is very satisfying and the contrast even better!
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This is a nice little poem, I really enjoyed reading it. You pack a lot of imagery into a very small space. I particularly like the contrast you make between the womb and then at the end, doom. The rhyme is very satisfying and the contrast even better!
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
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Birth, death, and hopefully rebirth. Thank you for your Support and Review.
Comment from Sally Law
A marvelous Winter Haiku for the challenge, dear poet. I enjoyed the rhyming scheme, and your art illustration was well-chosen.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the challenge,
Sally :))
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A marvelous Winter Haiku for the challenge, dear poet. I enjoyed the rhyming scheme, and your art illustration was well-chosen.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the challenge,
Sally :))
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Review. Blessings.