Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Fiction speaks the homeless state after he wakes up and finds him still alone; her anger state he felt only in dream; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 06-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021

Thank you very much

Comment from papa55mike

Exceptional

I've always found it difficult to understand why America has turned its back on homeless families and veterans. What a wonderfully written poem.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021

Thank you once again for these glittering stars.I love them!

Comment from Raul1

Good

I know that you meant to do this as a poem, but this looks more like a flash fiction story. Change it to poetry. It is clear and concise. Thanks for sharing! Good luck with the contest!

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 Comment Written 06-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021

I entered this as a poetry contest .But it came as a fiction. I tried to remove it but am not able to.Thank you very much for dropping by.

reply by Raul1 on 07-Mar-2021

You're welcome!

reply by Raul1 on 07-Mar-2021

You're welcome!