Melting Away
Every unkind act strips away a bit of self-esteem15 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem making great use of the suggested words. Nice photo selection to compliment your words. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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This is a nicely written poem making great use of the suggested words. Nice photo selection to compliment your words. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you. I appreciate your support and encouragement. Hugs.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks to share an experience stating that when one finds there is no safe and secure place to hide saving from danger, one turns to be a slipper of target or mission; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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This poem speaks to share an experience stating that when one finds there is no safe and secure place to hide saving from danger, one turns to be a slipper of target or mission; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for your supportive and complementary review. It is humbly appreciated. Hugs and blessings.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great use of the words that were given for this poem. What you have said is so true, unkind words and actions destroy the person to whom they are directed. I like your comparing it to ice cream melting and falling to the ground.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Great use of the words that were given for this poem. What you have said is so true, unkind words and actions destroy the person to whom they are directed. I like your comparing it to ice cream melting and falling to the ground.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your complementary review. It's appreciated. Hugs.
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You are welcome
Comment from papa55mike
Now that's an interesting storyline for a poem. Sometimes you got to eat. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Now that's an interesting storyline for a poem. Sometimes you got to eat. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Mike. I appreciate your kind words and your review. And the thought of six stars is what counts. :-) Hugs and blessings.
Comment from Debra White
Hello,
I enjoyed reading your poem. It's an original take on the writing prompt and you used the required words beautifully. The imagery is excellent and gives us a clear picture of the scene. The dripping, untouched ice cream is symbolic and somehow adds depth of feeling.
Very well written.
Good luck in the voting booth. Best wishes, Debra
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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Hello,
I enjoyed reading your poem. It's an original take on the writing prompt and you used the required words beautifully. The imagery is excellent and gives us a clear picture of the scene. The dripping, untouched ice cream is symbolic and somehow adds depth of feeling.
Very well written.
Good luck in the voting booth. Best wishes, Debra
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your encouragement and support. It is humbly appreciated. Hugs.