The Two of Me
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Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, clear and thought provoking. I
pondered on these words and for me my thoughts sometimes create
lots of stress! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect
and compliments the words of this poem. Great poem!
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The author's words are interesting, clear and thought provoking. I
pondered on these words and for me my thoughts sometimes create
lots of stress! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect
and compliments the words of this poem. Great poem!
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Thank you for your Support and Review.
Comment from DonandVicki
I agree with your poem and the translation. We are slaves to our thoughts, we can put ourselves in self imposed prisons and we hold the key to freedom in our hearts and minds.
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I agree with your poem and the translation. We are slaves to our thoughts, we can put ourselves in self imposed prisons and we hold the key to freedom in our hearts and minds.
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Amen, Thank you for your Support and Review.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written five line poem. Worries burdens planted in your mind crying for some attention your brains invention? Well done. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a nicely written five line poem. Worries burdens planted in your mind crying for some attention your brains invention? Well done. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you for your Support and Encouragement. Blessings to you.
Comment from jenintorre
Muis bein. A very good five line poem and competition entry. I like your choice of artwork and presentation. I wish you lots of luck and best wishes. Jen.
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Muis bein. A very good five line poem and competition entry. I like your choice of artwork and presentation. I wish you lots of luck and best wishes. Jen.
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Thank you for Reading, Rating, and Reviewing this poem offering. Blessings to you.
Comment from Raul1
I think that sometimes we think of our worries, but at another time we forget about them. We leave our worries behind. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
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I think that sometimes we think of our worries, but at another time we forget about them. We leave our worries behind. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
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Thank you for your Support and Review.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in great form. I enjoyed reading it. Your syllable count per line is correct. You give readers much to think about. The image is supportive, too. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your contest entry is in great form. I enjoyed reading it. Your syllable count per line is correct. You give readers much to think about. The image is supportive, too. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Thank you for Reviewing this poem offering.
Blessings.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like the artwork, QC.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective description and rhyme.
-You also have a very good message-
our worries and burdens have a way
of creeping into our brains and
nagging away at it.
-I think the answer is both.
-A good entry; good luck.
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-I like the artwork, QC.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective description and rhyme.
-You also have a very good message-
our worries and burdens have a way
of creeping into our brains and
nagging away at it.
-I think the answer is both.
-A good entry; good luck.
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Thank you for Reading, Rating, and Reviewing this poem offering.
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think we must be slaves to our thoughts, we tend to be ruled by them. Perhaps we should decide to go against them, throw them out and make new thoughts, some that send a possitive message. I'll give it a try today!! Well done, a well thought out poem. Good luck in the contest. :))Sandra xxx
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I think we must be slaves to our thoughts, we tend to be ruled by them. Perhaps we should decide to go against them, throw them out and make new thoughts, some that send a possitive message. I'll give it a try today!! Well done, a well thought out poem. Good luck in the contest. :))Sandra xxx
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Thank you for Reading, Rating, and Reviewing this poem, Good Luck!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
liked the poem and the thoughts behind it. I should try this contest later this week as well. like the flow and the rhythm as well
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liked the poem and the thoughts behind it. I should try this contest later this week as well. like the flow and the rhythm as well
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Thank you for Reviewing, Reading, and Rating this poem offering.
Comment from Vanna1
Good presentation. Creative and original. Good flow and word choice. Good ending to evoke some thoughts. I bet a lot of readers can relate. Thanks for sharing.
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Good presentation. Creative and original. Good flow and word choice. Good ending to evoke some thoughts. I bet a lot of readers can relate. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2021
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Bless you for Reading, Rating, and Reviewing this poem offering.