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Comment from
Pantygynt
This is a good little piece describing a seat above a beach facing west, I imagine to catch the sunset though you could be an early riser facing east for sunrise. Anyway, you know a good view when you see one.
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
Thank you for your feedback :) I appreciate it. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from
Sally Law
I agree. I'm an amateur astronomer and just recently viewed an eclipse through my birthday gift: a high powered telescope. The beach we live near looks just like this and truly the best seat in the house! Well penned and illustrated for the contest. I wish you the best, dear Debra.
Sal XOs...
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Sal, I appreciate it :)
The eclipse must have been such a wonderful sight...
Best wishes as always, Debra x
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