Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I enjoyed your entertainingly satirical take on how "The Cornella tribe" has affected our lives (and our brains)... you've also exposed how booze is so easily available and how apparent lack of will power is: "Just don't go to the liquor store, dummy!" - it seems so simple. Satire does tend to simplify things for a laugh. I laughed often.

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 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021

Thank you so much Lisa:)

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Very interesting satire. And the truth is COVID has forced a lot of changes. We'll see how many are permanent.

Coronella created new job opportunities, so now she can easily [ be a ] candidate for the presidency.

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those silly stories: (")like how you can't stop.

- I would delete this.

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 Comment Written 23-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021

Thank you so much for your corrections and suggestions.