Summertime
Dreaming of...12 total reviews
Comment from RodG
There is a wonderful POIGNANCY to this poem because the Speaker has never spent a summer day on an ocean beach. This especially comes through in stanza two. You might want to review the difference between ITS and IT'S.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
  |
There is a wonderful POIGNANCY to this poem because the Speaker has never spent a summer day on an ocean beach. This especially comes through in stanza two. You might want to review the difference between ITS and IT'S.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
-
Good idea! I've never been very skilled when it comes to punctuation. Lol. Thank you for this nice review. :)
-
You are very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It won't be long before we will be enjoying these scenes and in the meantime all we need do is read your pome to visit the beach, I wish you luck with the contest, a well rhymed poem, love Dolly x
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
|
It won't be long before we will be enjoying these scenes and in the meantime all we need do is read your pome to visit the beach, I wish you luck with the contest, a well rhymed poem, love Dolly x
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
-
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :)