haiku : sun simply shares
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Comment from zanya
An alliterative achievement here in this short poetic format of the Haiku conveying the essence of that orb in the sky with a beautiful image to illustrate
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An alliterative achievement here in this short poetic format of the Haiku conveying the essence of that orb in the sky with a beautiful image to illustrate
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Lovely poetry. Expressed the beauty of nature in a few words. As they say, if you walk in the mellow rays of sunshine, you will never want anything else more than what God has given you. Good luck in the contest!
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Lovely poetry. Expressed the beauty of nature in a few words. As they say, if you walk in the mellow rays of sunshine, you will never want anything else more than what God has given you. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork, G.
-You have written a good
haiku with effective nature
and seasonal imagery.
-You paint a vivid word
picture of the sun sharing its rays.
-A good satori line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Very nice artwork, G.
-You have written a good
haiku with effective nature
and seasonal imagery.
-You paint a vivid word
picture of the sun sharing its rays.
-A good satori line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written haiku, and low and behold great alliteration on every line, this is a great entry in this haiku poetry contest G I think it will do very well, good job, blessings Roy
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A beautifully written haiku, and low and behold great alliteration on every line, this is a great entry in this haiku poetry contest G I think it will do very well, good job, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Gosh, Gareth! You've won the contest! This is fabulous, not only have you given each line some delightful alliteration, your word choices to describe the sun gives it the imagery to compete with that stunning picture above. Superb and deserves a six which I'm sure someone will give you. I just wish I had one left. Well done, and good luck! :))Sandra xx
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Gosh, Gareth! You've won the contest! This is fabulous, not only have you given each line some delightful alliteration, your word choices to describe the sun gives it the imagery to compete with that stunning picture above. Superb and deserves a six which I'm sure someone will give you. I just wish I had one left. Well done, and good luck! :))Sandra xx
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2021