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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading this contest entry. It is very creative, but your posts always are. I had to laugh at the ice cream, my 2 year old granddaughter has a sore throat. She tried to convince her daddy, my son, that ice cream cured a sore throat. He texted me about it. I sent a text back that I believed her. LOL Ice cream cures everything. I wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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I enjoyed reading this contest entry. It is very creative, but your posts always are. I had to laugh at the ice cream, my 2 year old granddaughter has a sore throat. She tried to convince her daddy, my son, that ice cream cured a sore throat. He texted me about it. I sent a text back that I believed her. LOL Ice cream cures everything. I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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She is so right, as a student I used to eat ice cream in the middle of the winter, it was the best "sport" ever:) I hope she will feel better soon.
Comment from Sanku
Oh my God this is a scary scenario .No hunger no needs .just sleep and exist. I am glad there is a way out of this world .when the number is thousand there is an escape.All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Oh my God this is a scary scenario .No hunger no needs .just sleep and exist. I am glad there is a way out of this world .when the number is thousand there is an escape.All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for your good luck wishes and for your review:)
Comment from Bichon
Such an interesting story! I thought I was going into a funny story about a cat who enjoyed ice cream. Excellent work!
A few spelling errors I caught:
" We waked up a few months ago," should be woke I think.
" At noun just go out for a" noon, not noun I believe?
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Such an interesting story! I thought I was going into a funny story about a cat who enjoyed ice cream. Excellent work!
A few spelling errors I caught:
" We waked up a few months ago," should be woke I think.
" At noun just go out for a" noon, not noun I believe?
Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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You are so right about the grammar corrections:) than you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your prize!
IZA--disturbing prospect of a deadly dystopia. The only thing good is the prospect of ice-cream--or is it simply a tantalizing password?
autonomous=>AUTOMOTONS
we waked=>WOKE
In their seventy=>SEVENTIES
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Congrats on your prize!
IZA--disturbing prospect of a deadly dystopia. The only thing good is the prospect of ice-cream--or is it simply a tantalizing password?
autonomous=>AUTOMOTONS
we waked=>WOKE
In their seventy=>SEVENTIES
Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Done:) Thanks for waiting. Love yaaaaaaaaa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is assuming that we have not blown the world up with our in-fighting Iza, but I see some positivity here and I doubt we will be this bored in the future. Wouldn't it be good just to take a peek at it, a fun post, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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This is assuming that we have not blown the world up with our in-fighting Iza, but I see some positivity here and I doubt we will be this bored in the future. Wouldn't it be good just to take a peek at it, a fun post, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Now is finished:) sorrryyy