Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

A very good acrostic for the word "Romance" Rhyming is very good and poem flows smoothly. A good picture choice to illustrate your words. I hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Geoff

reply by Anne Johnston on 06-Feb-2021

You are welcome

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

This is a well-written acrostic poem. I like the way you've expressed the permanence of your relationship in the last line, as well as the dreams of your future together. The rhyming is good too. Best wishes in the contest.

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 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Geoff

reply by Carol Clark2 on 06-Feb-2021

You're welcome.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Oh, no, that last line means the babies are coming. Well, I guess that's what happens sometimes when true love gets ahold of people. Great rhyming and a good choice to add the acrostic to it. That makes this entry stand out.

Well done.

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 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thanks for your review. Sure hope she doesn't get pregnant now, that would be some medical miracle lol
Geoff