Failed
Contest Entry12 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Excellent entry for the contest, and your last stanza just emphasis the effects of the failure:"
My failing hasn't ever met its
dividends to a happy career.
My life is a self-fail all the time." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Excellent entry for the contest, and your last stanza just emphasis the effects of the failure:"
My failing hasn't ever met its
dividends to a happy career.
My life is a self-fail all the time." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Melissa Heilig
This made me feel sad for you to feel that way about yourself. It was, at the same time, relatable to people who have felt like a failure at some time in their life.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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This made me feel sad for you to feel that way about yourself. It was, at the same time, relatable to people who have felt like a failure at some time in their life.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thank you! No this is for the contest. I am supposed to write it like this. I don't feel like that. I'm glad you enjoyed it. The topic of the contest is failure. I feel optimistic and happy. It is a contest.