Awakenings
15 Syllable poem33 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are fine words and I find myself encouraging my grand daughter today as she is so upset she cannot go to school right now, I told her that this will not last forever and she must stay positive, your poem would be ideal to read to her, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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These are fine words and I find myself encouraging my grand daughter today as she is so upset she cannot go to school right now, I told her that this will not last forever and she must stay positive, your poem would be ideal to read to her, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thank you Dolly. I hope her classes start soon. She seems to love learning and being with her friends. We have the same lockdown here with schools and churches. I hope it ends soon. I appreciate your comments ~ really !! :)
Melissa
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Thank you for your kind words Melissa x
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Well done, Melissa. A very well written
poem for the contest. Awakening hope in others helps them cope with the problems that bring them down. That is a beautiful picture. Good Luck! Nancy:)
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Well done, Melissa. A very well written
poem for the contest. Awakening hope in others helps them cope with the problems that bring them down. That is a beautiful picture. Good Luck! Nancy:)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Hey Nancy. Thanks so very much!! :)
Melissa
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fifteen syllable poem about helping others finding hope will also give us hope and the darkness in our hearts will be wiped out with the light of life.
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A very well-written fifteen syllable poem about helping others finding hope will also give us hope and the darkness in our hearts will be wiped out with the light of life.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Hi Sandra. Thanks so very much!!
Melissa
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Melissa,
Very nice 15 word poem. The photo is beautiful, and the sentiment is touching. There is slot of gloom in the world, and hope is always needed. You say so much in just 15 words. Excellent poem.
Good luck in the contest,
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Melissa,
Very nice 15 word poem. The photo is beautiful, and the sentiment is touching. There is slot of gloom in the world, and hope is always needed. You say so much in just 15 words. Excellent poem.
Good luck in the contest,
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Hello Cindy. Thank you for your wonderful comments! So appreciated!
Melissa
Comment from dragonpoet
Candles provide light and hope just like people who help other provide light and hope in those they help. Very meaningful mix of words and artwork.
Good luck in the contest, Melissa.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Candles provide light and hope just like people who help other provide light and hope in those they help. Very meaningful mix of words and artwork.
Good luck in the contest, Melissa.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Hello Joan. Thank you so very much! So appreciate you!
Melissa
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My pleasure, Melissa.
Joan
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like you use these fifteen syllables in one sentence, which is very profound. Yes, awakening hope is a good way to kill the gloom in one's thought.
Well done and good luck in the contest. I think you will win.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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I like you use these fifteen syllables in one sentence, which is very profound. Yes, awakening hope is a good way to kill the gloom in one's thought.
Well done and good luck in the contest. I think you will win.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thank you, sweet Lisa! I really appreciate your comments!!
Melissa
Comment from Janice Canerdy
What wonderful use you have made of your well-selected syllables. One who awakes hope in another could be saving a life. What could be more rewarding?
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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What wonderful use you have made of your well-selected syllables. One who awakes hope in another could be saving a life. What could be more rewarding?
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thank you so very much, sweet Janice. Sharing hope is one of the most precious things we can do for each other!!
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
It is rewarding to have the ability to lift someone else's burden by giving them a spark of hope. The world can be a gloomy place for many who are mired in depression and darkness. Shining a little light their way can do so much good. Fine advice in poetic form.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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It is rewarding to have the ability to lift someone else's burden by giving them a spark of hope. The world can be a gloomy place for many who are mired in depression and darkness. Shining a little light their way can do so much good. Fine advice in poetic form.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Your comments were so true, June. The best thing we can do is for others is share hope... it changes everything. Thank you.
Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully penned fifteen syllable poem for the contest and with the perfect photo. Candles placed in the window are so hopeful.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs....
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Beautifully penned fifteen syllable poem for the contest and with the perfect photo. Candles placed in the window are so hopeful.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs....
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Hello Sally. Thanks so much!!
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
That's a lovely thought. I think that's why volunteer work is the most satisfying and rewarding because when we "awaken" hope in others, we are also blessed with that hope we see. Best wishes in the contest!
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That's a lovely thought. I think that's why volunteer work is the most satisfying and rewarding because when we "awaken" hope in others, we are also blessed with that hope we see. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Hello Helen. Thank you so very much!! Hope changes everything!!
Melissa