Lockdown Love
Rictameter19 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
It's probably kind of rough today to be a young person looking for the right someone. They can't go anywhere to meet someone. If they think someone is nice, have to stand six feet apart to yell out information, like name, age, etc. They can't even hold hands until they have been tested. And don't even think about kissing. Yeh, it's a tough age to be looking for love. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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It's probably kind of rough today to be a young person looking for the right someone. They can't go anywhere to meet someone. If they think someone is nice, have to stand six feet apart to yell out information, like name, age, etc. They can't even hold hands until they have been tested. And don't even think about kissing. Yeh, it's a tough age to be looking for love. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from MissMerri
A most appealing Rictameter in my opinion. The poem flows smoothly and the final words seem exactly right and in logical sequence, which doesn't always happen with this form. Good luck in the contest. MM
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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A most appealing Rictameter in my opinion. The poem flows smoothly and the final words seem exactly right and in logical sequence, which doesn't always happen with this form. Good luck in the contest. MM
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Great review zanya
Comment from Old Soldier
I like it a lot. When in love the heart is always young. Nice write. Good flow and structure. Thanks for sharing. I like the art work to. Keep reading writing and reviewing.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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I like it a lot. When in love the heart is always young. Nice write. Good flow and structure. Thanks for sharing. I like the art work to. Keep reading writing and reviewing.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Nicely written Rictameter. For love holds steady through darkest days or longest nights. For time heals young hearts. It's New to me but very nice style of writing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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This is a Nicely written Rictameter. For love holds steady through darkest days or longest nights. For time heals young hearts. It's New to me but very nice style of writing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
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Your welcome
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
I cannot begin to tell you how many couples have had to postpone
their weddings because of the pandemic. On the other hand, some
became quite creative. This is a wonderful rictameter extolling
young love. Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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I cannot begin to tell you how many couples have had to postpone
their weddings because of the pandemic. On the other hand, some
became quite creative. This is a wonderful rictameter extolling
young love. Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Great review zanya
Comment from Sharon Nolen
This was phenomenal. I will be trying this type of poem myself. I wondered how does one do this? You definitely met the requirements. But I learned from you that we can make the syllable count by continuing a sentence to the next line. I think that was important to me.
Also, you made plenty sense in this poem. It actually had a message to it.
Great job.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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This was phenomenal. I will be trying this type of poem myself. I wondered how does one do this? You definitely met the requirements. But I learned from you that we can make the syllable count by continuing a sentence to the next line. I think that was important to me.
Also, you made plenty sense in this poem. It actually had a message to it.
Great job.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Great reveiw zanya
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I hope it was helpful.
Comment from Carol Clark2
This Rictameter poem is well written. Your syllable count is perfect, and I like the way you tied the poem together using the first and last lines creatively. I also like the message of the poem, that love remains steady through difficult circumstances. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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This Rictameter poem is well written. Your syllable count is perfect, and I like the way you tied the poem together using the first and last lines creatively. I also like the message of the poem, that love remains steady through difficult circumstances. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thanks for sharing zanya
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My pleasure.
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
Nice entry for the rictameter contest, lockdown love. Sad times we're living in with no real end in sight. Love holds steady and time heals young hearts. I like the message. Good luck.
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Nice entry for the rictameter contest, lockdown love. Sad times we're living in with no real end in sight. Love holds steady and time heals young hearts. I like the message. Good luck.
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
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Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from L. Kalere
It's a very well written Rictameter (I stumble over that word every time). And, it's very upbeat and hopeful. It's been a rough year for keeping traditions. Best of luck in the contest.
Linda
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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It's a very well written Rictameter (I stumble over that word every time). And, it's very upbeat and hopeful. It's been a rough year for keeping traditions. Best of luck in the contest.
Linda
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya