Incidental Occurrences
Funny how life just happens, isn't it?15 total reviews
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed your poem, it is funny and has a nice feel to it. I particularly enjoyed the description of flowers as sunshine on a stem- very evocative. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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I enjoyed your poem, it is funny and has a nice feel to it. I particularly enjoyed the description of flowers as sunshine on a stem- very evocative. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your review today - very much appreciated, Oliver!
Comment from MissMerri
This is a beautifully presented poem that turns out to be more amusing than beautiful. It is clever and funny and an excellent use of the six required words. They are woven neatly into the fabric of your poetic story and the lovely color combination makes them easy to spot. I wish you lots of luck, though I'm sure this will do quite well in the contest. My favorite part... buying sunshine on a stem. Love that!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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This is a beautifully presented poem that turns out to be more amusing than beautiful. It is clever and funny and an excellent use of the six required words. They are woven neatly into the fabric of your poetic story and the lovely color combination makes them easy to spot. I wish you lots of luck, though I'm sure this will do quite well in the contest. My favorite part... buying sunshine on a stem. Love that!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your review today - very much appreciated, Miss Merri!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You think, feel and find life is somewhat funny or fun, and wish to portray a view point incidental occurrences happen in life appear ever unexpected, not everything beneficial but uncontrollable, change life, you never plan for life goes on like this; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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You think, feel and find life is somewhat funny or fun, and wish to portray a view point incidental occurrences happen in life appear ever unexpected, not everything beneficial but uncontrollable, change life, you never plan for life goes on like this; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your review today - much appreciated, ALCREATOR!
Comment from jenintorre
I really like this it is very cute and original, it made me smile. You use the allocated words really wellI. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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I really like this it is very cute and original, it made me smile. You use the allocated words really wellI. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your review today - very much appreciated, Jen!
Comment from Susan Newell
This gave me a chuckle. Nice incorporation of the words that must be used, as well as the telling of multiple stories. Very nicely done. I admit to wondering if the same mob was involved with the restaurant and distant cousin.
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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This gave me a chuckle. Nice incorporation of the words that must be used, as well as the telling of multiple stories. Very nicely done. I admit to wondering if the same mob was involved with the restaurant and distant cousin.
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your review today - very much appreciated, Susan!
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You are most welcome.
