Bloom Boom Times
Springtime is for flowers and more.18 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Lance, you have written two good lines - true to form with both internal and end rhyme. This is well worded with the appropriate picture - hay-fever LOL! Well done - good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Hello Lance, you have written two good lines - true to form with both internal and end rhyme. This is well worded with the appropriate picture - hay-fever LOL! Well done - good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Boom Boom Times', is short succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for you.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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'Boom Boom Times', is short succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for you.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review
You're very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Both my daughters suffer with hay fever and the sneezing starts like a chorus between them, but I adore spring and all the warmth it brings, a delightful read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Both my daughters suffer with hay fever and the sneezing starts like a chorus between them, but I adore spring and all the warmth it brings, a delightful read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from DonandVicki
I guess if the dandelions fluf doesn't get you then the allergys will. I enjoyed the quick poem and the image is well chosen to complement your work.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I guess if the dandelions fluf doesn't get you then the allergys will. I enjoyed the quick poem and the image is well chosen to complement your work.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from tfawcus
A poem for hay fever sufferers. These days there seem to be a lot more allergy sufferers than there used to be and a lot less wildflowers. We must be close to reaching a balance point. Good luck with your two lines worth.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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A poem for hay fever sufferers. These days there seem to be a lot more allergy sufferers than there used to be and a lot less wildflowers. We must be close to reaching a balance point. Good luck with your two lines worth.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Brigitte Elko
This is relevant for the season and it made me smile. It's not funny to have allergies but sometimes a sneeze can bring a snicker. The image is perfect to exemplify your words. Well done!
Entertained,
brigitte
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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This is relevant for the season and it made me smile. It's not funny to have allergies but sometimes a sneeze can bring a snicker. The image is perfect to exemplify your words. Well done!
Entertained,
brigitte
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Danke. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Seeing wild flowers bloom.
Hearing mild sneezes boom."
Good choice for the Spring contest. Allergies are the one thing that most people don't appreciate about spring, but we put up with them because of all the good things spring brings.
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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"Seeing wild flowers bloom.
Hearing mild sneezes boom."
Good choice for the Spring contest. Allergies are the one thing that most people don't appreciate about spring, but we put up with them because of all the good things spring brings.
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review. I just edited Seeing to Smelling. That works better!! Thanks again.
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You are welcome. I agree, that is a better word.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your words plus image pair nicely for your contest entry. I enjoyed reading your poem. Luckily, I'm not allergic to the few flowers that grow wild here or those planted. Good job with the rules of the contest.
May I suggest:
Seeing wild flowers bloom. [smelling wild flower's bloom. ]
Hearing mild sneezes boom. [compelling sneezes boom ]
[I know this is your work so file 13 my suggestion. Words that end 'ing' are difficult to rhyme although they may be near rhymes.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Your words plus image pair nicely for your contest entry. I enjoyed reading your poem. Luckily, I'm not allergic to the few flowers that grow wild here or those planted. Good job with the rules of the contest.
May I suggest:
Seeing wild flowers bloom. [smelling wild flower's bloom. ]
Hearing mild sneezes boom. [compelling sneezes boom ]
[I know this is your work so file 13 my suggestion. Words that end 'ing' are difficult to rhyme although they may be near rhymes.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Actually, my essence rhyme was wild and mild not the ing words but I do like your suggestion of smelling over seeing so thanks. I'm keeping hearing over compelling. I appreciate your ideas. Thank you for your review.
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So sorry, I focued on the 'ing' words. You are right about wild/mild.
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Would that be flowers'
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That depends if you want 1 flower
-->flower's
If you want more than one-->flowers'
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Who wants only one? LoL
