Tactile Emotions
More powerful than reality's touch...34 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written four line poem.soft are your memories caressing my soul.velvet whispers that suffuse my dreams. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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This is a nicely written four line poem.soft are your memories caressing my soul.velvet whispers that suffuse my dreams. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Joanne -- always so good to hear from you here in Dixie! ;) :) Have a wonderful day out there! ;) Yvette
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Your welcome
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I can see right off my association with you is going to be an uplifting one for me. LOL Well done. Love the picture!
It's almost February. We are moving toward Spring! Time change March 14th. I am looking forward to that! Warmer weather! LOL well done, Yvette. xxx Nancy:)
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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I can see right off my association with you is going to be an uplifting one for me. LOL Well done. Love the picture!
It's almost February. We are moving toward Spring! Time change March 14th. I am looking forward to that! Warmer weather! LOL well done, Yvette. xxx Nancy:)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Oh, uplifting is definitely the goal with me, my lady - so I am glad you found a smile!! ;) Thanx for the review on this one, Nancy -- take care of you out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
A delightful poem you created for this contest. One can just feel the emotion you portrayed. Do like those 'velvet whispers.'
IMHO ... the initial caps on your middle two lines are unnecessary and may alter the flow and connection among your first three lines.
My week will be better after getting the first vaccine shot tomorrow.
Mark
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Yvette,
A delightful poem you created for this contest. One can just feel the emotion you portrayed. Do like those 'velvet whispers.'
IMHO ... the initial caps on your middle two lines are unnecessary and may alter the flow and connection among your first three lines.
My week will be better after getting the first vaccine shot tomorrow.
Mark
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Good morning, Mark! ;) Thanx for the review and the reminder... you'll see that I did go in and make that change... guessing the computer decided they needed to be capitalized because I certainly did not enter them that way (yeah, should have looked closer at the double check!) ... Yvette
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of the limited syllables allowed to describe the power of memories. Great use of metaphor and personification to convey the romantic message
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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You have made excellent use of the limited syllables allowed to describe the power of memories. Great use of metaphor and personification to convey the romantic message
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Thanx for the review on this short one, Janic -- always great hearing from a fellow Dixie chick (wink, wink)! ;) Take care over there! ;) Yvette
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes for your entry to the four line poem, Yvette. It was rather interesting to say the least. It was concise and to the point and the picture was a perfect choice as was the title. Definitely woke me up and made me think...perhaps, what if, should I?
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Good luck wishes for your entry to the four line poem, Yvette. It was rather interesting to say the least. It was concise and to the point and the picture was a perfect choice as was the title. Definitely woke me up and made me think...perhaps, what if, should I?
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Hooray for waking up... at least once in a while, yeah? ;) :) Thanx for the review on this one, Alie -- always great hearing from you down here in Dixie! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
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You are so welcome, Yvette. Mmm if you mean Dixie as in Alabama, I don't think we are far, currently we are near Greensboro NC in the middle of God's country.
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Yep!! I do mean the big AL... :) :)
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LOL then howdy neighbor, lol.
Comment from robyn corum
Hey, Vettie! My Sister!
It's so good to see you back! And here you are showing off with one of those romantic tiny poems that you pack chock-full of all that magic only you can do. *smile* Your syllable count is just right and I'm certain the voters will love you. Thanks, friend. Good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Hey, Vettie! My Sister!
It's so good to see you back! And here you are showing off with one of those romantic tiny poems that you pack chock-full of all that magic only you can do. *smile* Your syllable count is just right and I'm certain the voters will love you. Thanks, friend. Good luck!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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I'm back amidst the chaos of life, my sista (lol!)... it may be touch and go over the next few weeks, but this is my 'escape' that I've been missing, so I?ll definitely be lurking here and there! ;) :) Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, BHF -- have a wonderful day over yonder! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sugarray77
Good morning Yvette. Good too have you back too. Hope you had a restful and enjoyable break. I felt the dreaminess in your verse ... it has an ethereal quality to it. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Good morning Yvette. Good too have you back too. Hope you had a restful and enjoyable break. I felt the dreaminess in your verse ... it has an ethereal quality to it. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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I'm back amidst the chaos of life, my lady (lol!)... it may be touch and go over the next few weeks, but this is my 'escape' that I've been missing, so I?ll definitely be lurking here and there! ;) :) Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Melissa -- have a wonderful day up there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good to see you, Yvette,
hope things are going well.
-Creative artwork and
nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic and imagery.
-You create a serene mood
with the opening word, and
the "velvet whispers."
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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-Good to see you, Yvette,
hope things are going well.
-Creative artwork and
nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic and imagery.
-You create a serene mood
with the opening word, and
the "velvet whispers."
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Pam -- always great to hear from you over here!! ;) Take care in your corner of the world and have a wonderful day! ;) Yvette
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You are very welcome, Yvette, and have a good day, too.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a very sensuous 4 line poem. What a lovely dream. I love the words you use and the picture is perfect for this poem. It is good to have you back. I hope you're right. May we all have a great week.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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This is a very sensuous 4 line poem. What a lovely dream. I love the words you use and the picture is perfect for this poem. It is good to have you back. I hope you're right. May we all have a great week.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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I'm back amidst the chaos of life, my lady (lol!)... it may be touch and go over the next few weeks, but this is my 'escape' that I've been missing, so I?ll definitely be lurking here and there! ;) :) Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Beth -- have a wonderful day out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Oooh Yvette, this is a lovely one. A really good, well written four lines, true to form and lovely words. Great picture. This reads like a winner - well done and Good Luck - Dorothy xx
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Oooh Yvette, this is a lovely one. A really good, well written four lines, true to form and lovely words. Great picture. This reads like a winner - well done and Good Luck - Dorothy xx
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Dorothy -- always great to hear from you over here!! ;) Take care in your corner of the world and have a wonderful day! ;) Yvette