Where Are All The Children
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Vigilantes Unite"A vigilante takes down trafficing rings.
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Comment from BethShelby
It sounds like the vigilantes are doing a good job of rounding up these guys for the authorities. I can certainly understand the wife wanting to destroy her husband manhood. Anyone who preys on little kids deserve to never be able to preform again. I can't feel sympathy for them. I enjoying your story.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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It sounds like the vigilantes are doing a good job of rounding up these guys for the authorities. I can certainly understand the wife wanting to destroy her husband manhood. Anyone who preys on little kids deserve to never be able to preform again. I can't feel sympathy for them. I enjoying your story.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm sure the idea would cross my mind if I found out hubby was getting friendly with our girls.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from forestport12
I wince every time you talk about someone's dinger or describe it being jabbed with a knife. Other than that, to be honest, your dialogue, your gripping action and pace keep this reader tuned in.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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I wince every time you talk about someone's dinger or describe it being jabbed with a knife. Other than that, to be honest, your dialogue, your gripping action and pace keep this reader tuned in.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter, despite your personal discomfort. I'm glad you enjoyed the last part of the story. I'll try to convince the vigilante to come up with a new idea.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from greyson ernst
this really really impressive you could probably could get the seal of quality and as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy weekend
sincerely Greyson Ernst
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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this really really impressive you could probably could get the seal of quality and as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy weekend
sincerely Greyson Ernst
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. A seal of quality would be an honor, a dream come true.
Thank you again. Take care and have a safe, happy weekend too.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Your posts are so revealing on the dirty business of human trafficking and child abuse. It is so unnerving to read how low men can become and how easily they can be caught by professionals.
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Your posts are so revealing on the dirty business of human trafficking and child abuse. It is so unnerving to read how low men can become and how easily they can be caught by professionals.
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for all your continued support it's always greatly appreciated. There's been numerous predators who use their looks and their charm to lure women into a trap.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.