The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 80 "Obedience"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
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Comment from humpwhistle
Iza, there are several misspellings and grammatical issues throughout this piece. Perhaps you posted hastily, I don't know. But I think you probably want to give this a little polishing before you get too many more reviews.
The 5 is based on the fact that you're usually more careful. I hope this is helpful.
Peace, Lee
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Iza, there are several misspellings and grammatical issues throughout this piece. Perhaps you posted hastily, I don't know. But I think you probably want to give this a little polishing before you get too many more reviews.
The 5 is based on the fact that you're usually more careful. I hope this is helpful.
Peace, Lee
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Good Evening, you are so right, I was in a hurry. No the mistakes are correct with the help of some friends:) Thank you:)