The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 75 "Born in 2020"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
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Comment from LisaMay
I think you are so right with your attitude - we do indeed need to know good and bad elements so we can appreciate our blessings. You've expressed your thoughts and concepts well; there are just several grammar and spelling suggestions I have:
They (There) are so many babies that have been borne (born) this year.
For example, if Coronella was not here in 2020, I will (change will to would) never get (change get to have gotten) a chance to know what an amazing province I live in.
I am not saying that 2020 was an easy year(add comma here) but just think
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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I think you are so right with your attitude - we do indeed need to know good and bad elements so we can appreciate our blessings. You've expressed your thoughts and concepts well; there are just several grammar and spelling suggestions I have:
They (There) are so many babies that have been borne (born) this year.
For example, if Coronella was not here in 2020, I will (change will to would) never get (change get to have gotten) a chance to know what an amazing province I live in.
I am not saying that 2020 was an easy year(add comma here) but just think
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for this kind review and the grammar corrections:)