I See Me
I don't always like what I see.37 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you used this prompt for a meditative reflection on oneself and how to focus on what to change. This is a perfect poem at the start of a new year! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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I like how you used this prompt for a meditative reflection on oneself and how to focus on what to change. This is a perfect poem at the start of a new year! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your message and review. The voting booth is open now to see all contest entries and cast a vote for the poem of your choice.
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Yes, you have my vote! Best wishes.
Comment from equestrik
I like the reflection here and your desire to be reflective and responsible for you and your choices. Good for you! i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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I like the reflection here and your desire to be reflective and responsible for you and your choices. Good for you! i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review and I hope you?ll vote for it.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Oh, wow! This sad clown evokes an instant emotional reaction. Yet your poem offers hope. It does set forth the seriousness of his case, the urgency of his inner condition, and yet, by recognizing your fallen condition and admitting your need to change, you tell the reader that you are willing to pick yourself up, dust yourself off and make a fresh start. This great poem also offers encouragement to others.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Oh, wow! This sad clown evokes an instant emotional reaction. Yet your poem offers hope. It does set forth the seriousness of his case, the urgency of his inner condition, and yet, by recognizing your fallen condition and admitting your need to change, you tell the reader that you are willing to pick yourself up, dust yourself off and make a fresh start. This great poem also offers encouragement to others.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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I appreciate and agree with your interpretation. Thank you for your message and review.
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You're very welcome. I'm glad you agree with my interpretation. Best wishes in the contest, and God bless you.
- Mary Kay
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Since this is anonymous chat I don?t think it is a rule violation to let you know the voting booth is open now for this contest so you can evaluate all entries and then vote.
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I think that is fine. Thanks for letting me know. I usually like to read all the entries before deciding (though I might not review them all), yet hope that there aren't too many! I meant to check the voting booth but forgot, so thanks again!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is a poignant, well written poem of regret and failure but looking to change and be a better person in the new year.
The rhyming is well done and flows well. You draw your reader into the mirror with your words.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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This is a poignant, well written poem of regret and failure but looking to change and be a better person in the new year.
The rhyming is well done and flows well. You draw your reader into the mirror with your words.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your message and review.
Comment from greyson ernst
this is really really impressive you won my vote the picture is creepy and as always keep writing and stay safe to you and yours happy new years
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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this is really really impressive you won my vote the picture is creepy and as always keep writing and stay safe to you and yours happy new years
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review
Comment from l.raven
it's never to late to make a new start...
it comes with a change of a humbled heart...
just look up a see, the smile on His face...
He will forgive us falling from Grace...
so look in the mirror, take a new stand...
God is our Father, He'll lead with His hand...smile...
I love your poem...so very well written...and the picture...speaks for itself...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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it's never to late to make a new start...
it comes with a change of a humbled heart...
just look up a see, the smile on His face...
He will forgive us falling from Grace...
so look in the mirror, take a new stand...
God is our Father, He'll lead with His hand...smile...
I love your poem...so very well written...and the picture...speaks for itself...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review
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you are soooo very welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Boogienights
I agree that we need to take a chance on life, get out and live and love the person that we look at in the mirror. This is a very nice contest entry, best of luck. :)
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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I agree that we need to take a chance on life, get out and live and love the person that we look at in the mirror. This is a very nice contest entry, best of luck. :)
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your message and review
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I don't always like what I see.
I See Me
Hello, anonymous,
Excellent entry for the Mirror Poem writing prompt contest. It's heartfelt. Sometimes it's hard to face ourselves in the mirror.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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I don't always like what I see.
I See Me
Hello, anonymous,
Excellent entry for the Mirror Poem writing prompt contest. It's heartfelt. Sometimes it's hard to face ourselves in the mirror.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Sherry Asbury2
Such a sad face... but don't we all have from time to time? Very good introspection and a great decision to buck up and change what you can.
That artwork is so stark and I wonder what you really look like? Doesn't matter, just keep your eye on the prize and truck on.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Such a sad face... but don't we all have from time to time? Very good introspection and a great decision to buck up and change what you can.
That artwork is so stark and I wonder what you really look like? Doesn't matter, just keep your eye on the prize and truck on.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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You know what I look like I just can?t tell you now. LoL. Thank you for your review.
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Now I will be up all night wondering...Johnny Depp - Orlando Bloom...Roy Owen...so many to choose from!
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Hint: I?m better looking than the clown.
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MY NEIGHBOR'S HOUND DOG IS BETTER LOOKING THAN THAT CLOWN!
BY THE WAY, DO YOU KNOW WHO THAT POET WAS WHO WROTE ALL THE SPOOKY STUFF? I LIKED HIS STUFF.
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No
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Yes. Dean Kutch was his name.
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Voting is over now you can see who I am. LoL. And my poem tied for 2nd place! Yay!
Comment from June Sargent
Now is a good time to take an honest look at ourselves. This difficult year has either brought out the best or the worst in us. If it was the latter - then it's time to take the symbolic mask off and deal with what's been hidden underneath...great piece for the beginning of a new year.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Now is a good time to take an honest look at ourselves. This difficult year has either brought out the best or the worst in us. If it was the latter - then it's time to take the symbolic mask off and deal with what's been hidden underneath...great piece for the beginning of a new year.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review
