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Lune Poetry Contest38 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
like the poem's slightly dark tone. Appropriate for this dark winter we are all living in -seeing a glimmer of hope after a long dark year of death, despair, and what might become Great Depression 2.0. But we hold onto that glimmer of hope although it seems to be just a flicker of light from a candle holding back the darkness all around. Hmm inspired me to turn this into a poem or something.
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like the poem's slightly dark tone. Appropriate for this dark winter we are all living in -seeing a glimmer of hope after a long dark year of death, despair, and what might become Great Depression 2.0. But we hold onto that glimmer of hope although it seems to be just a flicker of light from a candle holding back the darkness all around. Hmm inspired me to turn this into a poem or something.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Gloria ....
I really like what you have done with your lune, Zanya. Sometimes those dark wintry days can be oppressive, especially when they go on for weeks on end.
This is contest compliant and still contains a flicker of hope.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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I really like what you have done with your lune, Zanya. Sometimes those dark wintry days can be oppressive, especially when they go on for weeks on end.
This is contest compliant and still contains a flicker of hope.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
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Superb reveiw zanya
Comment from Boogienights
This is so true. There is something about the cold and darkness of winter that makes us want to burrow down under the covers and stay there. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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This is so true. There is something about the cold and darkness of winter that makes us want to burrow down under the covers and stay there. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
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Yes it's so true -thanks for reading zanya
Comment from robyn corum
Zanya,
Okay, here's the honest truth. I have read far too many of these lune entries lately and yours is the first one I have seen that is GOOD. Actually, excellent. I can't imagine any post that could beat this one in the voting. Thanks and good luck!
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Zanya,
Okay, here's the honest truth. I have read far too many of these lune entries lately and yours is the first one I have seen that is GOOD. Actually, excellent. I can't imagine any post that could beat this one in the voting. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
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Hurrah ! Thanks for all those encouraging words zanya
Comment from roof35
Indeed it does fade to a flicker. We all are doing our best to keep it lit in these very difficult days. You followed the rules and penned an excellent entry for the Lune Contest. Nicely done.
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Indeed it does fade to a flicker. We all are doing our best to keep it lit in these very difficult days. You followed the rules and penned an excellent entry for the Lune Contest. Nicely done.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Teri7
Zanya, This is a very nice and well written Lune poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery that went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
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Zanya, This is a very nice and well written Lune poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery that went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
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Thanks for a superb reveiw zanya
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
You capture my attention from the first line to the last
this is what I call a food for though poem
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
You capture my attention from the first line to the last
this is what I call a food for though poem
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
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And thanks again for a great reveiw & 6 twinkling stars zanya
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Your very welcome.
Hqave a safe and blessed day
Cookie
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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by zanya
Hello, zanya,
Awesome entry for the Lune Poetry Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Pretty presentation. It's very sad. It's important to have Hope.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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by zanya
Hello, zanya,
Awesome entry for the Lune Poetry Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Pretty presentation. It's very sad. It's important to have Hope.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from karenina
I wasn't positive about the format...and apparently after just coming back from surfing the web there are a number of variants. It might have been helpful to refer the reader to the contest rules to find what format was expected--if nothing else to help educate us.
Now--
Seeing the contest calls for 5 syllables/ three syllables/ five syllables--I see you've followed the format to a "T"... The mood is quiet and the perspective somewhat sad and yet the truth shines forth and after reading this a number of times I found myself comforted that any light at all survives.
Nice Lune.
Karenina
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I wasn't positive about the format...and apparently after just coming back from surfing the web there are a number of variants. It might have been helpful to refer the reader to the contest rules to find what format was expected--if nothing else to help educate us.
Now--
Seeing the contest calls for 5 syllables/ three syllables/ five syllables--I see you've followed the format to a "T"... The mood is quiet and the perspective somewhat sad and yet the truth shines forth and after reading this a number of times I found myself comforted that any light at all survives.
Nice Lune.
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
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Thanks for reading and reveiwing zanya
Comment from Ulla
Hi Zanya, I really liked thiis lune so very much. I can agree and visualise what you are portraying. Just a little info. A lune should not be centred as it has to portray a waining moon. Hence:
On dark wintry days
light of hope
fades to a flicker
Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Hi Zanya, I really liked thiis lune so very much. I can agree and visualise what you are portraying. Just a little info. A lune should not be centred as it has to portray a waining moon. Hence:
On dark wintry days
light of hope
fades to a flicker
Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
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Thanks for reading and sharing zanya