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Our Souls Are...15 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The circle of live, the circle of love, this is the soul miracle." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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The circle of live, the circle of love, this is the soul miracle." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from RetroStarfish
A lovely poem - and a lovely idea that our souls "...drift around until the time, that we again begin."
Very nice rhythm.
I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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A lovely poem - and a lovely idea that our souls "...drift around until the time, that we again begin."
Very nice rhythm.
I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you for this very nice review. :)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
What a lovely perspective! I enjoyed reading your thoughts.
This stanza is my favorite:
For our bright souls they never die,
just like the gentle wind.
They drift around until the time,
that we again begin.
I'll remember that ... :)
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer,
What a lovely perspective! I enjoyed reading your thoughts.
This stanza is my favorite:
For our bright souls they never die,
just like the gentle wind.
They drift around until the time,
that we again begin.
I'll remember that ... :)
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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I really believe that we get reincarnated over many lifetimes until we learn all that we are supposed to. Then it's heaven bound. Thanks for reading my poem. :)
Comment from zanya
These stanzas philosophize and reflect upon the idea of what it means to say we have 'a soul'- difficult for us to define yet arriving at the idea of love being 'the very essence /of this soul'
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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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These stanzas philosophize and reflect upon the idea of what it means to say we have 'a soul'- difficult for us to define yet arriving at the idea of love being 'the very essence /of this soul'
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reading and for your insightful comments. :)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a beautiful ballad for the contest here -- very well done, Mystery Author!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;) :)
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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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What a beautiful ballad for the contest here -- very well done, Mystery Author!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;) :)
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you, that is very nice of you. I appreciate hearing your opinion.hope you Have a good evening. :)
