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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Liz O'Neill this chapter. That's What It Was
I found very mysterious to read which kept me wondering what is this thing that is huge and ablaze with fire.
All I can think of it's huge oven?
Gert
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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Hello Liz O'Neill this chapter. That's What It Was
I found very mysterious to read which kept me wondering what is this thing that is huge and ablaze with fire.
All I can think of it's huge oven?
Gert
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your involved review. I'm glad it kept you mystified.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This story chapter is just as intriguing as each previous one. The girls are very curious, and they see and learn new things with each adventure. Well written!
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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This story chapter is just as intriguing as each previous one. The girls are very curious, and they see and learn new things with each adventure. Well written!
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your involved supportive review.