Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Yes, I remember you had written about Molly before. I think Molly still needs the hat. She looks very proud in her new outfit, and guests will be pleased to see her. Great rhyme in this. Molly looks more streamlined in her new outfit. Clever idea for a poem. judi

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020

Thanks for coming by. We tried to include the hat (Gail did come up with a replacement) but it blocked her ears or something so we decided to give it a miss.

reply by judiverse on 09-Dec-2020

You're very welcome. I hope you and your wife are both doing well. judi

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

Molly does look very nice in her brand-new suit. How nice of your friend to donate the material and to fashion Molly this lovely outfit. She'll be set for many more years now.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020

Thanks Judy. Gail gave us a choice of the material and this was what we chose. Seem we did good!

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I think I love the new suit better than the old one. It's all the rage, I'm told. She looks quite sporting in her new outfit. I'm so glad she is still holding the door for you two. Sending you my best today and blessings always,
Sal XOs...

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020

Thanks Sis. Glad you liked her new outfit. We were given a choice of material and we chose this one.

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

Very cute and the picture provides evidence. Is Molly a doorstop? In the sentence where you use "has worked" it should be "have worked". Also the last word confuses me because it has 2 meanings and 2 pronunciations. But maybe that's just me. Good luck with this.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020

Yes a door stop I will look at your suggestions and see what I can do will let you know. Thanks for coming by.

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020

Hi I changed "has" to "have" for the needle and cotton not sure what you meant about tears and years?

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

The Molly Mouse Makeover. Now that's a title to write about. I love to stumble over wonderful things like this that make me smile. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

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 Comment Written 07-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020

That sound like a good title maybe I might update it to your suggestion. Thanks for coming by glad you liked the poem.

Comment from George Santhosh

Excellent

Hahaha! Those look cute. I checked the old pictures of Molly too. Wonderful to know that someone is skilled to make gorgeous things from leftover material.

Thanks for sharing,
George

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 Comment Written 07-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020

Thanks George you are another new person I need to check out if I can get the time. Appreciate your lovely review.