My Daughter
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Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Mom,
Sounds like a series of wonderful moments culminating in the most amazing gift of love. It sure is handy to have a godfather as a doctor! I had no idea!
You never did mention your family - which makes me suspect things weren't perfect with them.
Nice job. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Dear Mystery Mom,
Sounds like a series of wonderful moments culminating in the most amazing gift of love. It sure is handy to have a godfather as a doctor! I had no idea!
You never did mention your family - which makes me suspect things weren't perfect with them.
Nice job. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Thank you Robyn for reading, reviewing and your great comments, one never knows about family.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I like your story and think a parenting or baby website might be interested in it if you use it as a memoir of what once was. You might start with, "the most special time in my life was in 19__ at the birth of my first child." Don't mention any of the things that are common today, but a shotgun wedding may need a little more explanation to today's mothers. Keep the child's sex secret until the doctor has guessed the sex wrong and says he'll forgive his fee. Good luck with this.
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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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I like your story and think a parenting or baby website might be interested in it if you use it as a memoir of what once was. You might start with, "the most special time in my life was in 19__ at the birth of my first child." Don't mention any of the things that are common today, but a shotgun wedding may need a little more explanation to today's mothers. Keep the child's sex secret until the doctor has guessed the sex wrong and says he'll forgive his fee. Good luck with this.
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much Carol for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from equestrik
What a beautiful story here and one of love on a couple of levels. You have had some wonderful people in your life! The love of you two as a couple is lovely as well as the love for your new child. The Dr. was incredible as well. Good story!
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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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What a beautiful story here and one of love on a couple of levels. You have had some wonderful people in your life! The love of you two as a couple is lovely as well as the love for your new child. The Dr. was incredible as well. Good story!
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reading, reviewing and your great comments.