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Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Schwit, schwit, schwit"With their call stalled, Liz & Linda begin walking
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Comment from lyenochka
Whew! That was close - who knows who were in that van. I like how you used this part to bring a recap of what happened before. I also like the sound of Schwit- schwit - schwit for the sound of the water in the shoes.
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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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Whew! That was close - who knows who were in that van. I like how you used this part to bring a recap of what happened before. I also like the sound of Schwit- schwit - schwit for the sound of the water in the shoes.
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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Your review amused me. Thank you for seeing my points of interest.