Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a bug write with a difference and I enjoyed your inventive story and you brought the characters to life here and you entertained me, much fun, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks so very much........I love my little junk verses....Godspeed and Good luck to you......Stu Harrell

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

A very nice children's rhyming poem, it has adventure, cute characters and a wonderful story about the neighborhood bugs and other elements of nature, trying to make Auntie Ant's dream come true. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks so very much......I do enjoy a little slap dash verse.....Godspeed always and Best Wishes to you......Stu Harrell

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

A delightful flight of fancy--clever wordplay: cauldron of plots and plans and moon balloon. Alliterative whimsy--petals/parachute! (typo: cheery hoard s/b horde; late a usual s/b as)

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks so much....you are right....needs a little tidy up........Godspeed and Best Wishes......Stu Harrell

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

I like your poem. I am sure it takes a lot of effort to write fantasy like this. Good descriptions of the different insects and the last line sums up the co-operation of each one to get Ant to where she wanted.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020

Thanks so very much....I do like little silly verses......Good Luck to you and Godspeed ......Stu Harrell

reply by Anne Johnston on 20-Nov-2020

You are welcome

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written fun poem to entertain the neighborhood kids and keep them from mischief. Telling them all kinds of unbelievable stories and tell them to proof you wrong.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020

Yikes.....what a beautiful name.....Thanks so much for your kind thoughts....I do enjoy little light verses......Godspeed to you and yours.....Stu Harrell

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Very imaginative and creative. As you say, kids need to be encouraged to both look and see, and then be encouraged to release their creativity in a fun poem.

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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020

Thank you.....very kind of you....I have a lot of fun with these little light lyrics.....Godspeed and Best Wishes.....Stu Harrell

Comment from Ann Market

Excellent

This is such a cute poem with a lovely inspiration behind it! The story is quite vivid, and I enjoyed reading it very much. I think children would also have fun imagining the story in their minds, and watching it unfold. Wonderful poem!

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 Comment Written 20-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020

Thanks so much.....I have fun with the jumble bumble of nonsense verse....Godspeed and Best Wishes......Stu Harrell