Phones on 'Silent'
When was the last time you just enjoyed each other?30 total reviews
Comment from juliaSjames
Seems like a great fantasy to me. Well written vivid write that sets the scene for a romantic encounter worthy of the big screen.
Good luck in the contest and do stay safe.
Blessings Julia
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Seems like a great fantasy to me. Well written vivid write that sets the scene for a romantic encounter worthy of the big screen.
Good luck in the contest and do stay safe.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for dropping in for the review tonight.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Naani Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines...it flows nicely.
The verse is very romantic and the presentation helps.
Good luck in the contest.
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Naani Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines...it flows nicely.
The verse is very romantic and the presentation helps.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you for stopping by for the review this evening.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of the few syllables allowed for the naani to paint a lovely, romantic, appealing picture--using specific details that
convey a wonderful message.
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You have made excellent use of the few syllables allowed for the naani to paint a lovely, romantic, appealing picture--using specific details that
convey a wonderful message.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
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Comment from LisaMay
You set the scene for a romantic interlude with sensory skill in your words. If "phones on silent" were to be left unattended it sure would be a mood-breaker. The phone should be put aside more often to enhance personal one-on-one.
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You set the scene for a romantic interlude with sensory skill in your words. If "phones on silent" were to be left unattended it sure would be a mood-breaker. The phone should be put aside more often to enhance personal one-on-one.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you for stopping by for the review this evening.
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:) The sun is shining here in New Zealand.
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Please soak up some rays for me!!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Nicely written naani poem for the contest. Smooth jazz and sparkling wine. Fantasy just you and me in satin sheets divine. Very nicely done. Beautiful photo as well.
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Nicely written naani poem for the contest. Smooth jazz and sparkling wine. Fantasy just you and me in satin sheets divine. Very nicely done. Beautiful photo as well.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
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Comment from dragonpoet
This is simple abcb poem which tells of a romantic fantasy of love. The red font color is the color of love.
Your choice of artwork is a good illustration for the poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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This is simple abcb poem which tells of a romantic fantasy of love. The red font color is the color of love.
Your choice of artwork is a good illustration for the poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for stopping in for the review today!
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You are most kindly welcome.
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Comment from royowen
A well qualified entry in this contest, but not only that but a first class entry in this Naani, you were the outer limit of 25 syllables, but used them beautifully in situ, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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A well qualified entry in this contest, but not only that but a first class entry in this Naani, you were the outer limit of 25 syllables, but used them beautifully in situ, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you for stopping by for the review today!
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Welcome
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is very romantic, indeed with flesh, lace, wine, Jazz, satin and fantasy. What else do we need? Phones are on silent but they do vibrate. The pomegranate are also a metaphor for the harvest.
I'm glad you used the title and picture of this poem to provide more information.
Well done.
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This is very romantic, indeed with flesh, lace, wine, Jazz, satin and fantasy. What else do we need? Phones are on silent but they do vibrate. The pomegranate are also a metaphor for the harvest.
I'm glad you used the title and picture of this poem to provide more information.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Naani about enjoying time together without a cell phone interrupting is something we just deliberately have to do. We can put the phone completely off for a two hour or longer period. We can catch up later on the messages.
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A very well-written Naani about enjoying time together without a cell phone interrupting is something we just deliberately have to do. We can put the phone completely off for a two hour or longer period. We can catch up later on the messages.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
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So very important, Sandra!! Thank you for your review here and have a good week!
Comment from Boogienights
This is a wonderful contest entry, more couples should follow your lead. Satin sheets sound divine and also the wine. Thanks for sharing abd good luck in the contest
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This is a wonderful contest entry, more couples should follow your lead. Satin sheets sound divine and also the wine. Thanks for sharing abd good luck in the contest
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you for stopping by for a review today. So glad you enjoyed!
