Renga Two
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem in addition to the multi-author Renga book describing the sunrise every morning when it drives the darkness away and paints the sky with colorful hues
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem in addition to the multi-author Renga book describing the sunrise every morning when it drives the darkness away and paints the sky with colorful hues
Comment Written 09-Nov-2020
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like this poem and its optimism with a bright colored art. I have read many poem like this one recently that has to do with the election result. Whether it is about the election or not, it is good to be optimistic.
Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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I like this poem and its optimism with a bright colored art. I have read many poem like this one recently that has to do with the election result. Whether it is about the election or not, it is good to be optimistic.
Well done.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Vivid and clever--I picture that shining sun wielding its brush and sweeping technicolor radiance throughout the land! A lovely addition to the renga.
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Vivid and clever--I picture that shining sun wielding its brush and sweeping technicolor radiance throughout the land! A lovely addition to the renga.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
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Comment from equestrik
What a beautiful presentation for the book! This painting is vibrant and beautiful and your words go well as it speaks to the magic of the coming of a new day!
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What a beautiful presentation for the book! This painting is vibrant and beautiful and your words go well as it speaks to the magic of the coming of a new day!
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was a creative and beautiful poem. I liked the final line about living color. Thought that was a creative way to describe it. A well written and enjoyable poem.
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I thought this was a creative and beautiful poem. I liked the final line about living color. Thought that was a creative way to describe it. A well written and enjoyable poem.
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
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