Where Are All The Children
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In this chapter in the book, writer of this fiction speaks about proclamation of love, a second chance, shows a generalized viewpoint, promoting a nominal stand of expression vividly; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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In this chapter in the book, writer of this fiction speaks about proclamation of love, a second chance, shows a generalized viewpoint, promoting a nominal stand of expression vividly; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. That you were able to feel the love they have for each other. Your review, opinion is always greatly appreciated, take care.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I guess I'll just have to wait and see what direction the story goes into now. We just never know anyone's true intentions. But as with most things, history repeats itself. Thanks for sharing.
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Well, I guess I'll just have to wait and see what direction the story goes into now. We just never know anyone's true intentions. But as with most things, history repeats itself. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter and for such a marvelous review. I figure Anna needs a little happiness in her life. It'll also show some of the inner struggles she has to face.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement wonderful stars, and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from robyn corum
Misty,
I'm really kind of glad they cloroformed her (or whatever) so that she didn't have to endure and experience and remember what happened to her so viciously.
Notes:
1.) (")Alejandro and I barely spoke more than a few
2.) Also need quote marks to begin and end next paragraph, right?
3.) but they (were) so cold, distant like they were put off by my being there.
4.) It (is) a miserably, hot, mid-September day. The temperature is in the triple digits;
5.) "Nighty night, princess(,)" I hear as I nod off to sleep.
6.) I(')m going to die if I don't get help soon.
7.) (")I'm sorry I got mad at you, that I treated you the way I did.
8.) Alejandro spring(s) to his feet. "Anna?"
9.) "You're not a whore, Anna, you're not, you('re) not.
10.) "You're neither of those things, and (i)f I have to,
Great chapter - thanks!~
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Misty,
I'm really kind of glad they cloroformed her (or whatever) so that she didn't have to endure and experience and remember what happened to her so viciously.
Notes:
1.) (")Alejandro and I barely spoke more than a few
2.) Also need quote marks to begin and end next paragraph, right?
3.) but they (were) so cold, distant like they were put off by my being there.
4.) It (is) a miserably, hot, mid-September day. The temperature is in the triple digits;
5.) "Nighty night, princess(,)" I hear as I nod off to sleep.
6.) I(')m going to die if I don't get help soon.
7.) (")I'm sorry I got mad at you, that I treated you the way I did.
8.) Alejandro spring(s) to his feet. "Anna?"
9.) "You're not a whore, Anna, you're not, you('re) not.
10.) "You're neither of those things, and (i)f I have to,
Great chapter - thanks!~
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such an extensive review. Your help is always greatly appreciated. They did do her a favor using the chloroform.
Thank you again for all your help and support. It's always greatly appreciated, take care.
Comment from BethShelby
It is horrible what happened to her in that field. I seems she barely survived it but Alejandro loves her and understand why she has done what she has done to survive. He sees something in her that she can't see in her self. She is courageous to stand up and tell her story. I look forward to reading more.
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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It is horrible what happened to her in that field. I seems she barely survived it but Alejandro loves her and understand why she has done what she has done to survive. He sees something in her that she can't see in her self. She is courageous to stand up and tell her story. I look forward to reading more.
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such a warm review, Alejandro will help her through a lot. It's because of him that she's doing what she is.
Thank you again for all your support, friendship. It always means a lot to me, take care.